Friday, 20 March 2015

Meloncholy

                                                                Why this melocholy
                                       mom's  only son on deathbed
                                              doc's advice  cheery.



                                                 Little  baby  happy
                                            gone those meloncholies
                                                  time to rejoice.

 Written for Care Diem#689 Meloncholy

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5 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille21 March 2015 at 01:31

    Very sad ... but really melancholy

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  2. Anonymous21 March 2015 at 15:03

    Touching words, Usha Ma'am. The pain depicted in a powerful way.

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    1. Unknown21 March 2015 at 17:04

      Thank you Vishaal. The topic is a sad one.

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  3. elly stornebrink23 March 2015 at 08:36

    Such a stark contrast, the last line of the first poem just as haiku should. That is a blow! ;) <3

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