The contrast between the two verses is interesting!
Thank you KP.
Love the contrast yet so close to each other:)
Thank you Vishal
Nicely done.
Thank you Cheryl for reading .
Oh, the entwined cords, the bane of my OCD life. But your haiku are lovely.
Thanks a lot for reading this.
Your second haiku paints a vivid picture of my computer wires: I have a number of them...enough! ;) <3
Thanks a lot Elly.
the first one is so right .. all entwined make a solid ball but if need to be untwined will result in loss for sure Bikram's
Thank you Bikram
The contrast between the two verses is interesting!
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DeleteLove the contrast yet so close to each other:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal
DeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Cheryl for reading .
DeleteOh, the entwined cords, the bane of my OCD life. But your haiku are lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for reading this.
DeleteYour second haiku paints a vivid picture of my computer wires: I have a number of them...enough! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Elly.
Deletethe first one is so right .. all entwined make a solid ball but if need to be untwined will result in loss for sure
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Thank you Bikram
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