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Tuesday, 16 July 2013

Rain Haiku

Haiku   Rain
                     dark  night clouds
                roaring, thumping,deafening, scary
                      kids  behind sheets.







Written in response to Ruchira's Haiku  for Write Tribe
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18 comments:

  1. the little princess16 July 2013 at 19:24

    sweet! my little one is scared of the thunder too and that's exactly what he does....hide under a sheet!

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:04

      How cute! My daughter is now married. She is still scared of thunder.

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  2. Reshma17 July 2013 at 00:13

    As kids while we enjoyed getting drenched in rain, the thunder was enough to send us into the home :) Very nicely composed Ushaji:)

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:05

      Thank you Reshma. All children are scared of thunder.

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  3. Tall Girl in Japan 17 July 2013 at 09:47

    Nice imagery Usha !

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:06

      Thanks a lot Ruchira. Welcome to my site.

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  4. anilkurup5917 July 2013 at 12:22

    It is a prelude , the rain hasn't dropped yet!

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:08

      Rains have started here. If not much, thunder is there to scare the kids.

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  5. Panchali17 July 2013 at 17:18

    Beautiful imagery...lovely Haiku. You are doing great on write tribe and other prompts!! Great job..

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:10

      Thank you Panchali. I am still a novice. I have learnt a lot from you!

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  6. Amrit Sinha17 July 2013 at 22:14

    This is a beautiful visual haiku :)

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:11

      Thanks a lot Amrit. Welcome to my site.

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  7. Megha17 July 2013 at 22:27

    That was fun haiku. I liked the last line :)

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    1. Unknown18 July 2013 at 10:12

      Thanks Megha. Kids really are scared of thunder.

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  8. Ankita 18 July 2013 at 09:14

    that was a cute Haiku :)

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  9. Shilpa Garg18 July 2013 at 23:50

    That's a good one, Ma'am :)

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