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Saturday, 10 August 2013

Haiku # 269 Ocean

                                     








                                                         
                                                 


                                                               Depth of blue eyes
                                                     so intense,layered and complex
                                                              cant find  LOVE.



                                                           

                                                             

                                                                 Day not far
                                                           no suspense in the eyes
                                                                  I will   DROWN.




i                  Prompted by Haiku Heights # 269 Ocean     pic courtesy google                                  



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13 comments:

  1. Unknown10 August 2013 at 18:18

    Interesting write...

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    1. Unknown10 August 2013 at 20:34

      Thank you Himani and welcome to my site.

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  2. kalpana solsi11 August 2013 at 10:46

    The intense look in the eyes is akin to diving to the ocean bed. lovely haiku.

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    1. Unknown11 August 2013 at 14:04

      Thank you Kalpana.Glad that you liked it.

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  3. Reshma12 August 2013 at 04:11

    Very true Ushaji, the eyes hold many mysteries like the deep ocean...Loved both the Haiku :)

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  4. anilkurup5912 August 2013 at 12:40

    "Depth of blue eyes
    so intense,layered and complex
    cant find LOVE."
    "Day not far
    no suspense in the eyes
    I will DROWN."

    I like the prose, but did I not see something that you thought?
    You cant find love and yet drowning...!
    Perhaps if one drowns in love seen in the deep blue ocean eyes!

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  5. Panchali12 August 2013 at 13:06

    Yes! How can an Ophthalmologist find 'love' in depths of blue eyes! The subject matter is layered, deep and complex..:)
    I love the first one more, Usha...

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    1. Unknown12 August 2013 at 17:31

      Thanks Panchali. Love is complex.People "fall"in love.

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  6. Anonymous12 August 2013 at 13:07

    Love!!! Deep =)

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    1. Unknown12 August 2013 at 17:33

      Thank you mlm. The depth of love cannot be measured.

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  7. rudraprayaga14 August 2013 at 23:23

    Both house depth and warmth.

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  8. Unknown15 August 2013 at 13:56

    Thank you Sarala.

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