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Monday, 26 August 2013

Haiku Heights # 273 Bat

                                           

                                                    Recently I had posted a blog ('A naughty bat'  on 27th July 2013)when a bat entered my grand daughter's room. I am writing this Haiku depicting her reaction.

                                                                                       A bat gushed in
          making my doll out of wits
     hid behind curtains

                                             

       she  screamed,  trembled,
with eyes closed, the naughty
         bat flew away.
                
                                                                                           
                                                                                         

                                                             

         











prompted by Haiku Heights # 273  Bat









             

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24 comments:

  1. Nanka26 August 2013 at 16:13

    Hahaha!! I had a similar experience when a bat flew came crashing in through my front room as we were just getting ready to call it a day!! The excitement then lasted half the night!! :D :D

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    1. Unknown26 August 2013 at 18:12

      Nanka,I can imagine your plight when a bat entered your room. It really a scary creature.

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  2. Balqis DBJ26 August 2013 at 16:43

    I'm a grown up girl but I'm still feeling scared seeing little thing like a bat! You pictured it so vividly in this Haiku the experience your grand daughter went through. :)

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    1. Unknown26 August 2013 at 18:09

      Thank you Balqis for stopping by. I think every one shuns these bats. They are so repulsive.

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  3. Sumana Roy26 August 2013 at 16:45



    aww...poor child..mischievous bat..very enjoyable haiku.....

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    1. Unknown26 August 2013 at 18:13

      Thanks for your words of appreciation, Sumana.

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  4. Rat26 August 2013 at 17:34

    enjoyable read. loved it. :)

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  5. Panchali26 August 2013 at 19:54

    Oh, these monsters can get wild...
    Awww, poor little girl :(
    Nicely done, Usha. Enjoyed reading...

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    1. Unknown27 August 2013 at 11:05

      Ya Panchali these creatures are are horrible. The child was really terrified.

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  6. Anonymous26 August 2013 at 22:44

    Ow, I hate bats and I'm sure I would have screamed too, even louder.

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    1. Unknown27 August 2013 at 11:13

      I have yet to come across a person who likes these monsters.

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  7. rallentanda27 August 2013 at 06:12

    A horrible experience. I hate them too.Evil creatures.

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    1. Unknown27 August 2013 at 11:15

      Yes Rallentanda, no one welcomes these ugly creatures.

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  8. Amrit Sinha27 August 2013 at 12:13

    These is too cute ... I know how children are afraid of bats, but their reactions are adorable.

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    1. Unknown27 August 2013 at 13:52

      Thanks Amrit.Not only the children even adults are afraid of these creatures.

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  9. Destination Infinity27 August 2013 at 13:28

    Bats are more afraid of humans, than what humans are of bats.

    Destination Infinity

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    1. Unknown27 August 2013 at 13:55

      You are right the bats are wary of human beings.Thanks for visiting.

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  10. Anonymous28 August 2013 at 00:45

    Very nice use of words and story. you say a lot in a short poem.

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  11. Unknown28 August 2013 at 07:12

    Thank you Alice.I am happy that you liked my poem.Thanks for the visit.

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  12. anilkurup5928 August 2013 at 12:21

    That was simply pretty.

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  13. Unknown28 August 2013 at 18:38

    Thank you Anil.

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  14. rudraprayaga28 August 2013 at 22:24

    Very nice Ushaji.

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