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Monday, 10 November 2014

Winter feeling.






Today's Haiku is  in a new form. It  is a story of 55 words followed by a Haiku  Winter feeling
Last week on a full moon night we had a picnic on the lawns of India Gate, near the lake. It was very pleasant. Mild winter  has set in. The cool breeze, touching my cheek was ecstatic! The full moon , in its full glory was very enchanting Sheela was missing her friend..Wish he was here!
India gate at night time.
India Gate on a moonlit night
                                                                   
                                                                
                                                                 Moon lit night
                                                         cool breeze in  the park
                                                               feel  heavenly bliss.


Written for Carpe Diem # 1 Winter feeling









       

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24 comments:

  1. BK Chowla,10 November 2014 at 12:15

    Yes,winter has set in..I always look forward to winters.We have put off our A/Cs almost ghere weeks back.
    Best part of winter is heavy clothing......HELPS HIDE THE PAUNCH

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  2. PirateGunn10 November 2014 at 14:10

    So sincere and enthusiastic - and makes me think so much of India! Very well done!

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    1. Unknown10 November 2014 at 21:26

      Thank you PirateGunn

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    2. PirateGunn10 November 2014 at 21:52

      PS, a haibun challenge if you'd like! http://fly-indie.weebly.com/ligo-haibun

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  3. Adas Alcove10 November 2014 at 15:28

    Nicely done!

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  4. payal agarwal10 November 2014 at 16:13

    That's really nice. I love this weather. :)

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  5. kaykuala10 November 2014 at 21:26

    The full moon will be expected to provide solace! Great write Usha!

    Hank

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  6. Jules10 November 2014 at 21:51

    The full moon lit up our lawn - the silver white reminded me of snow.
    It was so bright - but no picnic at 4 am when it was in the middle of our back yard.

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    1. Unknown11 November 2014 at 08:44

      Thank you Jules.You enjoyed the beauty of the flower.

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  7. Unknown10 November 2014 at 22:32

    Love taking a walk on such a crisp moonlit night. This is beautiful! ♥

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  8. Janice11 November 2014 at 05:41

    Beautiful setting in our minds after reading you take on the winter feeling haibun.

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    1. Unknown11 November 2014 at 10:06

      Thank you Janice. I am glad that you liked it.

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  9. Anonymous11 November 2014 at 06:19

    This is beautiful, Usha -- I feel your joy!

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    1. Unknown11 November 2014 at 10:07

      Thank you Jen. I really feel elated in winter.

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  10. Chèvrefeuille11 November 2014 at 11:10

    A very nice haibun Usha .... full of enthousiasm ... nicely done!

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    1. Unknown12 November 2014 at 16:39

      Thank you Kristjaan for the words of appreciation.

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  11. brudberg12 November 2014 at 00:39

    So different from anything I call winter.. so real that I felt I had joined you at the table.

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  12. Asha14 November 2014 at 20:23

    nice description of the wintry weather, ma'am.

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