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Monday, 28 July 2014

Clear Haiku Horizon prompt 23



                                                      Clarity of words
                                               Teacher in the class spoke
                                                     impressed  students.'


                                                     The river water
                                              clear as pearls, reflects her face
                                                     not the cruel heart.


                                                     The young face
                                            clear, glittering, glows radiantly,
                                                      fit for beauty queen.



                                                  Marks of measles
                                       over shadowed  his clear skin.
                                               poor heart  hurt.



Prompted by Haiku Horizons  prompt 23  Clear







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25 comments:

  1. rallentanda28 July 2014 at 15:34

    I like the second one.Nice haiku Usha !

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  2. Amrit Sinha29 July 2014 at 00:31

    A very beautiful set.

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  3. Anonymous29 July 2014 at 02:18

    Beautiful Ma'am:)

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  4. Anonymous29 July 2014 at 04:05

    Nice work, such a nice variety of haiku!

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    1. Unknown29 July 2014 at 12:02

      Thank you hawiiansupermom.Thanks for dropping by.

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  5. Anonymous29 July 2014 at 04:31

    A wonderful series of haiku -- but I too am really impressed with the second haiku. :)

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    1. Unknown29 July 2014 at 12:04

      Thanks a lot for liking and also for paying a visit to my site.

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  6. Reshma29 July 2014 at 06:54

    Brilliant set Ushaji, I loved the first one for its simplicity and the second for the profound wisdom.

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  7. Anonymous29 July 2014 at 09:31

    Very nice--I especially like the second one.

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    1. Unknown29 July 2014 at 12:07

      Thank you leonaslines for liking the haiku and also for the kind visit.

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  8. Anonymous29 July 2014 at 22:48

    Wonderfully done!

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    1. Unknown30 July 2014 at 20:16

      Thank you Celestine for the visit and your sweet comments.

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  9. payal agarwal31 July 2014 at 00:38

    second one is so deep! and the 4th one reminds me of chicken pox!

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  10. Anonymous31 July 2014 at 07:33

    All are lovely. I like the contrast of the external reflection with the internal self.

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    1. Unknown31 July 2014 at 12:26

      Thank you alicekeysmd. for the encouraging comments.

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  11. Anonymous1 August 2014 at 00:25

    i love the second one , so poetic ma'm !

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  12. rudraprayaga1 August 2014 at 17:44

    Beautiful especially the second one.

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  13. Balqis DBJ2 August 2014 at 06:33

    I enjoyed your Haiku They're so beautifully written. :)

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