Bright morning
Sunny bright morning.
Lovers out for morning walk
Hand in hand reached the riverside.
Lost in love, they whisper sweet nothings.
Should we bind in matrimony, be one eternally?
Two bodies one soul will be inseparable forever forever.
They decide to tie a knot earliest possible date,
Happily the couple went dreaming of the day .
Did not know destiny had plans otherwise
Parents' shock denial, came as surprise
United bravely they faced obstacles.
Two became one forever,
On moonlit night
Shining stars'
Blessings.
This poem is written in inverted nonet.form. This is my first attempt.
Written for Ultimate Blog Challenge Day 4.
pic courtesy google
Aw! This is so sweet!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot ,Satya.
DeleteI am always for lovers:)
ReplyDeleteYes Renu and specilly when they are united in love.
DeleteGood one, Ushaji
ReplyDeleteThank you Rahul.
DeleteWow! coherently composed. loved the alignment of the reverse nonet too . Good one, ma'am.
ReplyDeleteAsha your inspiring words are very encouraging.
DeleteHello! impressive first attempt...
ReplyDeleteThank you preciousmurmurs.Welcome to my space.
DeleteBeautiful! Captured the essence of love so well here, Ma'am!
ReplyDeleteThank you Aathira. Glad you liked it.
DeleteWonderful poem. And in a nonet form. Wow!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Rahmath. Welcome to my space.
DeleteSo romantic! Happy ending make me go soft :) Love the simple and straightforward approach you have written it with :)
ReplyDeleteI meant *endings
ReplyDeletethank you Vinodini
Deletevery sweet Ushaji, i was so unaware of this form of poetry!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tina.
Deletei was unaware of this poetry form too maam! beautiful poem ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you Swathi.
DeleteBeautifully lovely !!! A very sensible, first attempt !
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja
DeleteThat is a lovely poem Ushaji, the form is difficult but you made the love story shine like a diamond
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma
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