A pointed finger
cast towards the murderer
hangs head down.
Point to ponder
God gives liberal mercies,,
be honest O man.
Blood oozing
pricked by sharp pointed thorn
child howling.
Written for Haiku Horizons prompt#51 'point'
cast towards the murderer
hangs head down.
Point to ponder
God gives liberal mercies,,
be honest O man.
Blood oozing
pricked by sharp pointed thorn
child howling.
Written for Haiku Horizons prompt#51 'point'
Brilliant haiku, Usha Ma'am:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal.
DeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala.
DeleteAll are nice but I liked the second one especially
ReplyDeleteThanks KP. Where have you been?Seen you after a long time.
DeleteLoved the three different perspectives!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Shilpa
DeleteI really enjoyed your three different perspectives. What a wide variety. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Alice.
DeleteAll three awesome and love all the direct perspectives. Very creative! ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathy. Glad you liked it.
DeleteLoved all the three.
ReplyDeleteThank you sooo much, Sarala
DeleteThe pointed finger is so damning, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteSticking Point