Like Haiku, Dodoitsu is also a Japanese form of poetry. It is a four line poem, generally on love or humour. It has four lines with 7-7-7-5. I am making a sincere attempt here.
No fear of any body
I sleep fearlessly,
in my beloved's arms.
Calm and quiet.
On a dark stormy night
dogs barking in fury,
at their own shadow.
Cats are smiling.
Written for Carpe Diem Tokubedsudesu # 58 Dodoitsu
No fear of any body
I sleep fearlessly,
in my beloved's arms.
Calm and quiet.
On a dark stormy night
dogs barking in fury,
at their own shadow.
Cats are smiling.
Written for Carpe Diem Tokubedsudesu # 58 Dodoitsu
Very nice response Usha. Happy you dropped in yo read mine
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You said it well,Ushaji.
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DeleteHa ....clever last stanza. You evoke a feeling of contentment and love in this verse.
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