Lush green grass,
ideal for winter afternoon
lost in dreams.
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A maze of greenery,
miles and miles of radiance
meets the horizon.
Prompted by Haiku Heights #307 - Grass
ideal for winter afternoon
lost in dreams.
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A maze of greenery,
miles and miles of radiance
meets the horizon.
Prompted by Haiku Heights #307 - Grass
Both are nice but I loved the second one
ReplyDeleteThank you KP.
DeleteBasking under the sun on a lush green grass covered lawn on a winter afternoon is truly appealing. Loved both. By the way mine is at http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/11/03/its-beautiful-its-troubling-its-addictive-its/
ReplyDeleteThank you Geeta for your sweet comments.
Deleteah the second one is so soothing, peaceful and out of the world .......almost heavenly ..... beautiful lines Ushaji
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumana for such lovely comments.
DeleteVery nice. Sounds like someplace I'd like to go to.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kendall.If you find some such place,let me also know.
DeleteI can envision both. Beautiful!! ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathy. Your comments are welcome.
DeleteI enjoy both though I'm stuck on "miles and miles of radiance". Late afternoon shimmer as the sun sets, o yes
ReplyDeleteThanks Cheryl for such cute comments.
DeleteBoth are nice. And both contain radiance entering minds.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sarala,for the nice comments.
Deleteprefer the second one
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thanks Gillena. Luv!
DeleteEach of your haiku makes me want to put it on my canvas, I love the emotions and sensitivity of the words. May be one day I will give you one of my painting and request for a haiku for that :-)
ReplyDeletePadmaja, you have made my day. I feel on seventh heaven by the thought that my Haiku can be captured in your painting.
Deletebeautiful haikus, Usha Mam :) I wish I could learn writing a haiku :) why no pics this time ? :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja. Your comments are always inspiring.
Deletebeautiful! i love winters :)
ReplyDeleteAnkita thank you for dropping by. Thanks for your appreciative words.
DeleteLovely Haiku Ushaji, miles and miles of radiance is indeed a treat to the eyes :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma for such inspiring comments.
Deletenice images. somehow, i think the 2 haiku are interconnected, as if you arrived at the 2nd haiku from the first, after walking a distance. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dsnake. It is only my imagination which linked the two haiku.
DeleteBeautiful and full of welcoming sounds and imagery.
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thanks Eliz, for stopping by. Glad that you liked it.
DeleteBeautiful and soothes the heart:)
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Thank you VishaI. I am happy that you liked it.
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