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Sunday, 17 November 2013

Haiku Heights # 309 Blood

 


  A  life fading
for hours. Match less blood.
enemy gives blood..



All men alike
  red blood in every heart
 why this spite?




Man don't hide
tell tale  marks on  skin
prove you guilt..




Prompted by Haiku Heights # 309...Blood.






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25 comments:

  1. Surbhi Bafna17 November 2013 at 16:28

    Men united by blood , divided by intentions. Well- written Granny.

    Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

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  2. Sumana Roy17 November 2013 at 17:13

    some truths of life....wonderfully expressed Ushaji

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    1. Unknown17 November 2013 at 19:21

      Thanks Sumana for your wonderful comments.

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  3. Jyotsna Bhatia17 November 2013 at 19:43

    haha.. hey Usha, we were on d same page today with your second haiku !

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    1. Unknown18 November 2013 at 09:54

      Thank you Jyotsna. I will read yours shortly.

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  4. Angelika Poe18 November 2013 at 03:24

    I really like this haiku ...

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  5. Empty nester at last18 November 2013 at 05:16

    Interesting....provides a great picture to my mind!

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    1. Unknown18 November 2013 at 09:59

      Thank you DbV for visiting this site. Your comments are welcome.

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  6. Sri Valli18 November 2013 at 20:49

    Lovely haiku set! Especially first one...Touching!! :)

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    1. Unknown21 November 2013 at 08:06

      Thank you Sri Valli. I am glad you liked my Haiku. Welcome to my blog.

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  7. Anonymous18 November 2013 at 21:31

    Wonderful expressions, ma'am

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  8. Anonymous19 November 2013 at 00:06

    "why this spite"
    all people began
    from one clay

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  9. Reshma19 November 2013 at 05:50

    blood is very precious and donating it only thickens human ties...loved the first one Ushaji. Will man ever realize this?

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    1. Unknown21 November 2013 at 08:12

      Thank you Reshma. Good thoughts. Glad you liked it.

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  10. Amrit Sinha19 November 2013 at 11:46

    The 2nd haiku speaks a lot ... why this fight when we are all the same?

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  11. rudraprayaga19 November 2013 at 12:40

    Impressive haiku.The second one 'why this sprite?' I loved.

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  12. kalpana solsi20 November 2013 at 17:39

    very very true.

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  13. Shilpa Garg20 November 2013 at 23:52

    Loved the second one!!

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