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Thursday, 6 February 2014

How do I tell her about you.

Geeta and Suresh were  happily married.  Geeta could not conceive. Life became dull and drab. They  adopted a baby girl and named her Pari. The secret of her birth and adoption was never revealed to her. Pari was in love with Jeet. Their parents did not object to the  marriage of the  love birds. One day, finding Geeta in a contemplative mood, Pari asked her why  she seemed  worried.   Geeta was worried how the truth  of  Pari's birth should  be revealed to her mother- in-law. In her heart she was always thinking,"How do I tell  her about  you?"

Written  for Write Tribe prompt 100 words on Wednesday. The topic for the prompt is 'How do I tell her about you.'
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19 comments:

  1. Shailaja V6 February 2014 at 12:22

    With honesty and love. Everything will fall into place. Nice drabble, Usha :)

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  2. padmaja6 February 2014 at 16:17

    It is hard especially since Pari hasn't been told before, so did she tell the truth finally? Nice that you left the end to be guessed by the reader.

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  3. Anonymous6 February 2014 at 19:19

    Powerful story, Ma'am. What matters is the love:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/02/02/100-words-on-saturday-14-5-how-do-i-tell-her-about-you/

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  4. Found In Folsom6 February 2014 at 20:58

    It is always hard to deal such matters, isn't it? I mean you donno where you will break whose heart...

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    1. Unknown8 February 2014 at 06:51

      Thanks Latha. You are correct.Such situations are very delicate.

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  5. rudraprayaga6 February 2014 at 21:52

    It is difficult to disclose the matter.Nice.

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  6. Shilpa Garg6 February 2014 at 23:36

    A tough one. And considering that the child isnt aware of this too!! Devastating it would be!

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  7. Reshma7 February 2014 at 01:42

    I hope it never needed disclosure... Some times truth is better hidden than revealed.

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  8. Amrit Sinha7 February 2014 at 12:27

    This is tricky :-(

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  9. Anonymous7 February 2014 at 13:30

    Though the situation is very tough...Geeta's belief in her unconditional love can work in her favor...
    you have pictured the story very nicely

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  10. payal agarwal7 February 2014 at 23:32

    Tough situation..! Very nicely penned..

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