My hero
We lived in a society flat. Krishan lived alone in the building next to ours. I could see his window from my bedroom. Some times I saw him standing near the window, watching me from the corner of his eyes. If I looked at him he immediately turned his face.
Once I had fever and did not see him for some days. I missed him. One evening I saw him entering our flat. My parents were by my side. He came inside. My pulse rate increased. The moment he entered a very soothing flavour of his after shave lotion filled the atmosphere.His clean shaven face bowled me over. I realised I was in love!
We got married within one month.He was a very lovable, humourous, and considerate person. I loved to gently pat his face, which was as smooth as a rose petal and fragrant like a lily. I loved to see his clean shaven face. To tease me he would say, I am going to keep a beard. I too lovingly said in that case I would divorce him. He would take me in his arms and whisper that even in his dream he will not have a beard!
This is purely a fictional story.
I am accepting Madam Panchali's and Kalpana Solsi's tag and writing in response to that.
I would like to tag my friends, Reshma, Padmaja and Shilpa Garg
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Loved your fictional story.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalpana.
Delete'Fictional story'!? :) Well, loved your story.
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Thank you Arvind. This is a fictional/cum real story. Thanks for the words of appreciation.
DeleteInteresting fiction.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sarala.
Deleteoh..i thought this was real!!! sweet!
ReplyDeleteThank you Titli. Did you really think it was real? Ya, to some exent!
DeleteOw, I don't think this is a fictional story, Usha. Lovely romantic story it is...enjoyed! Thanks for writing...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali. This is a mixture of realityl and fiction. After all fiction is a mirror of reality. Is'nt it? Happy you liked it.
DeleteLovely cute little short story, loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jairam. Glad you liked it.
DeleteIt felt so real Usha, loved the sentiment and sensitivity behind this cute little story :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Padmaja. for liking the story.
DeleteWonderful story Ma'am. And thanks for tagging me. But am afraid, I'll not be able to participate in this contest. In case it is mandatory for the tagged members to write posts for this contest, then pls remove my name. All the very best for the contest :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa. No problem, if you are not able to participate, forget it.
DeleteSo real :) Beautifully done Usha :) :) :) I have tagged you here. Hope you will accept :)
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Thank you SIS. I am glad you liked my story. Thanks for tagging me. OK. I will try to write.
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