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Monday, 21 April 2014

Empty

                                                                     
                                                   my blank heart
                                            came empty to the world
                                                  why worry  now!






                                          Empty  the plate
                                    empty is the  red pocket
                                         baby wants  cake.





Written in response  to Haiku Horizons  prompt 'Empty'


                                      
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26 comments:

  1. Locomente21 April 2014 at 07:33

    Loved both...
    But 1st one is my favourite..
    "Why worry now!?"

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  2. KParthasarathi21 April 2014 at 07:35

    Both are nice and like Locomente the first one caught my fancy.Thank you.

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  3. rallentanda21 April 2014 at 08:47

    Why worry now ,indeed !

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  4. rudraprayaga21 April 2014 at 12:29

    Poor baby.Nice ones esp.the second.

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  5. Rahul Bhatia21 April 2014 at 15:14

    Everyone wants the cake Ushaji:)

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  6. Swathi Shenoy21 April 2014 at 16:15

    loved the first one :)

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  7. Magical Mystical Teacher21 April 2014 at 16:25

    Never too late to fill the emptiness, I think.

    Empty Blue Swing

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  8. Vishal Bheeroo21 April 2014 at 18:33

    Cute Haikus and they are lovely. Th first one is full of wisdom to learn from, Usha Ma'am:)

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    1. Unknown21 April 2014 at 18:40

      Thank you Vishal. I am glad that you liked the Haiku.

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  9. Anonymous21 April 2014 at 20:43

    Nicely done Ma'am. Great to see you back!

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    1. Unknown22 April 2014 at 14:39

      Thank you Celestine. You have taken a great initiative to start Haiku Horizons.

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  10. Unknown21 April 2014 at 21:43

    They were cute to read:-) Loved it - why worry now .. - indeed?:-)

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    1. Unknown22 April 2014 at 11:59

      Thanks Eli Z.for the words of appreciation.

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  11. Reshma22 April 2014 at 05:51

    The heart came blank into this world so that it may be filled with wonderful memories. But yes, it is not to be filled with worries, wonderful philosophy Ushaji.

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    1. Unknown22 April 2014 at 12:01

      Thank you Reshma for such inspiring comments.

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  12. payal agarwal22 April 2014 at 13:24

    yes,"why worry now?" nice haiku..loved them both! :)

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  13. Rajlakshmi24 April 2014 at 15:34

    how beautiful. Lovely Haikus :)

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