Hot is the sun
Thirst dry lips, parched throat
pilgrims dead tired.
Baby elephant,
what great fun theyhave
forget the heat.
Sclorching heat
Inside the A/C room comfort
unaware of hot .
Written for Haiku HorizonPrompt 'Hot" Week 41
Thirst dry lips, parched throat
pilgrims dead tired.
Baby elephant,
what great fun theyhave
forget the heat.
Sclorching heat
Inside the A/C room comfort
unaware of hot .
Written for Haiku HorizonPrompt 'Hot" Week 41
Beautiful Haiku on the sun and its various forms:)
ReplyDeletethank you Vishal.
DeleteI love the diversity of each one. Brilliant collection! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy.
Deletei loved all 3..the baby elephant was most fun!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Titlli
DeleteI sympathize with the poor pilgrims, had fun with the elephant and shivered in the A/C. What a nice variety you've made.
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Thanks Alice.
Deletewhy should you feel sorry for the internal tustle between two giants?
Need the hotness here... it has suddenly become so cold here... the first winter day, actually! :)
ReplyDeleteHere in Delhi,too, it is biting cold.
Deletethree different takes on the prompt ... and all are good .. found the second one so pleasant and the third a tad ironical .. while the first is all Aastha .. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kokila for the encouraging comments.Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteGood haiku. :)
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