These traffic jams
dreadful sight day and night
crossing road impossible.
Lizard,cockroach,rat
wasp, at home,take the breath.
mother daughter shriek.!
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prompted by Haiku Heights #290 ~ September Heights Day 17 ~ Dread
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Loved your haiku, Ushajee.
ReplyDeleteAll are annoying yet play an essential role.
Essential but dreadful. Thank you Ruchira.
DeleteThank you Ruchira. We try to keep away from them.
DeleteI am very scared of lizards, roaches etc. but nice haiku.
ReplyDeleteTraffic scene is a nightmare.
Thanks Kalpana. I have yet to come across a girl who can tolerate these dreadful creatures.
DeleteI really dread getting stuck in the jam and no place to go!! Nice ones Usha!!
ReplyDeleteTraffic jams are a night mare. Thanks Nanka
DeleteEeeks....I dread both the traffic-jam and those creepy crawlies...:((
ReplyDeleteExquisite take, Usha....niiiice :)
Both are nightmares. Thanks for such lovely comments, Panchali.
DeleteExcellent..I have heard the shrieking sounds... and trafic jams have taught me patience...when one can't do a thing, one observes and pick up moments to create haiku..without boundaries...
ReplyDeleteGood take by you Ushaji..thanks..
RS
Good thought RS. You have 'some' patience. I become desperate when caught in a traffic jam. Thank you RS.
DeleteNice ones! Ushaji:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rahul.
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ReplyDeleteboth dreadful..yet found a place in these wonderful lines...great job
Ushaji.. :)
Thanks Sumana for words of appreciation.
DeleteHmm, it's a hard choice: traffic jam today, or cockroach?
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Thanks MMT. Both are dreadful.
DeleteOh Usha, how I hate cockroaches. I prefer the traffic jam!
ReplyDeleteThank you RIP.I too hate the sight of a cockroach.
DeleteI like the traffic jam one too!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rallentanda.
DeleteI have faced these in Bombay for years
ReplyDeleteI think traffic jams are the worst in Bombay.Thank you.
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