Haiku Heights # Den September Heights Day 25
Dingy, dark, dirty
Secluded,stinky,solitary, sober,cell
trapped in delusion.
Simple,sanguine, serene
with my computer, and phone
I love my den.
Prompted by Haiku Heights # Den September Heights Day 25
pics courtesy google
I can identify with the second.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalpana
DeleteSecond one, spot on ! First one, a sad reality for many, women in particular !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja. All bloggers can relate to the second one.
Delete@1st Haiku
ReplyDeleteSad... Yet so true...
@2nd haiku
I agree too!!!
Nice madam :)
Thank you Satya.I am glad you liked this.
DeleteThe contrast between the two is well made. You should give thanks that you are in the second situation.There is so much suffering in the world!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rallentanda. Thank you for your words of appreciation.
DeleteNice,madam. Laddles,wares,vegetables
DeleteI am ho!Busy in my den.
Thank you Sarala, Our den keeps us occupied.
DeleteStark contrasts!
ReplyDeleteThank you Leonard.
DeleteBoth are nicely written ..... having their own fragrances and colors
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheela for your sweet and fragrant comments.
Deleteboth very vivid images and i particularly like the alliteration ........wonderful Ushaji...
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumana for the wonderful comments. Only you noticed the alliteration.
DeleteTrapped in delusions is probably one of the worst places in the world to be!
ReplyDeleteThree Dens with Geese
Amazing contrast. The first one a stark reality and the second one, well, very refreshing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Catherine. Your comments always motivate me.
DeleteThe second one is my story! :D
ReplyDeleteYes Shilpa, this is the story of every blogger. Is'nt it?
DeleteI particularly liked the first one, especially that great last line.
ReplyDeleteThanks mjshorts, for your words of appreciation. Welcome to my site.
Deletethere is always light after dark tunnel
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr. Pathan. There is hope till we live.
DeleteLovely...next time when I'm in Delhi, I am going to visit your den. Beautiful set, Usha :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali. You are most welcome to my den.
DeleteSecond one sounds so much closer home
ReplyDeleteYes Bhuvanesh, every blog writer can relate to it.
DeleteThe negative of the first and the positive of the second with solitude as a common factor has been brought out beautifully .
ReplyDeleteJaishree, thanks a lot.
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