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Thursday, 29 January 2015

Surprise Haiku

  Today the Haiku is based on a short story.which relates a scene of a beautiful river side and all of a sudden  a  bright eyed deer appears as a surprise. I have given another surprising twist to the story.
Read on;                                      

                                            Riverside bright eyed
                                       deer seen.Where they hide
                                             next morning ?


Written for Carpe Diem Prompt   # 4 'Surprise'.












                                                 
                                                  
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 January 2015 at 20:52

    That's an intelligently woven twist that makes the Haiku extra special:)

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    1. Unknown31 January 2015 at 17:04

      I was thrilled at your comments ' that the Haiku is extra special.

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  2. Amrit Sinha30 January 2015 at 00:15

    Mysterious !!! Loved it :-)

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    1. Unknown31 January 2015 at 17:22

      Thank you Amrit for the encouraging comments.

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  3. Ananya31 January 2015 at 03:10

    Great post..Love d mystery
    Happy Weekend !

    www.ananyatales.com

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    1. Unknown31 January 2015 at 17:26

      Thank you Ananya.for the encouraging comments.

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  4. elly stornebrink2 February 2015 at 12:38

    Ah, well though they can be like "deer in the headlights" (pardon the pun), they can also scamper away pretty quickly too! You have captured that well with your haiku Usha. :) <3

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