A small rift
over a minute misunderstanding
nothing left.
A running train
at fast speed over the bridge
crushed a man.
Over and above
his regular meagre salary
he has nothing.
Bees suck honey
queen bee builds honey comb
over a high tree.
Written for Haiku horizons week 86 ''OVER''
over a minute misunderstanding
nothing left.
A running train
at fast speed over the bridge
crushed a man.
Over and above
his regular meagre salary
he has nothing.
Bees suck honey
queen bee builds honey comb
over a high tree.
Written for Haiku horizons week 86 ''OVER''
Thoughtful lines..
ReplyDeleteBut while writing haiku please follow 5-7-5 syllable rule, which makes them more authentic. I too made mistakes initially, but a dear blogger helped me correct it.
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The first one is so poignant !
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