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Monday, 27 January 2014

Haiku Heights #319 - Useless

                                                 

                             Sunny  back from school
                      broken pen, chalk, stones beads
                                 his"precious" items.



                                 Useless weather
                       dark,dingy,drab,dreary days
                           gloomy ,grimy,murky.
        

                                 Down the hill
                  sombre,seedy shabby soiled
                            house,stands  alone..










 

Haiku Heights #319 - Useless




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31 comments:

  1. Amrit Sinha27 January 2014 at 10:44

    A brilliant set, the first one is my favorite :-)

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  2. Unknown27 January 2014 at 11:20

    nice haiku set :)

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  3. Sreeja Praveen27 January 2014 at 15:37

    Live imagery :) we all have had such precious items from school :)

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  4. Anonymous27 January 2014 at 18:31

    These are brilliant! I love the alliterations!

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    1. Unknown29 January 2014 at 07:33

      Thanks Celestine.Only you have noticed the alliterations.

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  5. Unknown28 January 2014 at 02:47

    Great collection of haiku. Love the imagery you created. ♥

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    1. Unknown29 January 2014 at 07:36

      Thanks Kathy. I appreciate your comments.

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  6. Unknown28 January 2014 at 02:57

    Your haiku evoke wonderful imagery. Nicely done!

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    1. Unknown29 January 2014 at 07:55

      Thank you Kedal Thorman. I am glad that you liked it.

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  7. Reshma28 January 2014 at 03:52

    Lovely trio Ushaji :) The first one reminded me of my oldest treasure chest :P

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  8. Shilpa Garg28 January 2014 at 15:10

    All three are fabulous for the prompt. In the first one, what's useless for us is so precious for the children :)

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  9. the little princess28 January 2014 at 17:07

    I have had such precious collectibles too! Great haikus!

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    1. Unknown29 January 2014 at 08:07

      Thank you Titli.Glad you liked them. Where were you last few days? Missed you.

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  10. rallentanda28 January 2014 at 18:38

    I like the first one with the boy and his precious finds. Very sweet and charming!

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    1. Unknown29 January 2014 at 08:11

      Thank you Rallentanda. for your cute comments.

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  11. Milan Rajkumar28 January 2014 at 22:01

    love the precious items !

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  12. rudraprayaga29 January 2014 at 13:10

    Very nice esp. the first one.

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  13. Anonymous30 January 2014 at 03:22

    I especially relate to "useless weather". But all are nice.

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    1. Unknown3 February 2014 at 17:24

      Thanks Alice. i am glad that you liked it.

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  14. Balqis DBJ2 February 2014 at 20:00

    Loved the set. You wrote well on the prompt. :)

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    1. Unknown3 February 2014 at 17:25

      Thank you Balqis for your words of appreciation.

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  15. Locomente3 February 2014 at 20:34

    I really loved the second one.. And the way it sounds!

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    1. Unknown4 February 2014 at 20:15

      Thank you Satya. I am glad that you liked it.

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  16. Lmkazmierczak4 February 2014 at 06:23

    Nice sets of prose...captures life segments rather brilliantly♪

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    1. Unknown4 February 2014 at 20:19

      Thank you Lmkazmierczak for the comments.

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