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Sunday, 19 January 2014

Mom's bodyguard



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It was Sunday morning.Annie got up with a start. It was 9'0 clock and she had to reach the airport to receive her hubby,who was coming home after two months. She had to prepare lunch before leaving. She rushed to the bakery, across the road. Suddenly she saw her son standing near a steel drum. He was in his night dress. She was surprised and asked,"Sonny Baba,why did you come here behind me? What are you doing there?"  The  child replied innocently, ''Mom I came to escort you.  I am looking for chocolates". Annie was dumbfounded.




2d514474-672f-49c4-929e-6b3f8dc84559_zpsbca51962 This is a fiction written for Write Tribe’s 100 Words on Saturday – A Picture Prompt







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29 comments:

  1. Nabanita19 January 2014 at 12:52

    Ohh that was a wonderful take Usha ...

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  2. Unknown19 January 2014 at 13:01

    Thank you Nabanita.

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  3. kalpana solsi19 January 2014 at 15:26

    Sonny Baba is so sweet , as sweet as the the chocolates. A very good take on the prompt.

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    1. Unknown19 January 2014 at 18:57

      Thank you Kalpana.Happy that you liked it.

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  4. Shilpa Garg19 January 2014 at 17:02

    Such a sweet escort!! A cute take on the prompt, Ma'am :)

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    1. Unknown19 January 2014 at 18:58

      Thank you Shilpa.Happy that you liked my take on the prompt.

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  5. Sandhya19 January 2014 at 21:52

    Very nice! Such a caring kid!

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  6. Shaifali19 January 2014 at 23:23

    Cute and Innocent! Made me smile :)

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  7. Sreeja Praveen20 January 2014 at 12:03

    Just made me pop a piece of chocolate into my mouth :D Sweet :)

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    1. Unknown20 January 2014 at 13:18

      Thanks Sreeja. I am glad that you liked it.

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  8. padmaja20 January 2014 at 12:22

    Very sweet , this will never fail to put a smile on anyone who reads it !

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  9. Reshma21 January 2014 at 04:46

    Awww, very sweet lil bodyguard :)

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  10. Anonymous21 January 2014 at 06:47

    A witty little bodyguard...
    Lovely!

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 13:00

      Thank you Sheela for your words of appreciation.

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  11. Rajlakshmi21 January 2014 at 09:39

    such a sweet little bodyguard :D

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  12. Asha21 January 2014 at 09:50

    How innocent! Loved the boy's reply:)

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  13. Unknown21 January 2014 at 12:57

    Thanks Payal .

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  14. BK Chowla,21 January 2014 at 19:12

    Each one is talking of boy....look at the Saree design.

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  15. Shiva22 January 2014 at 13:31

    wat a cute bodyguard to have... lovely take on the prompt.

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  16. Unknown22 January 2014 at 18:22

    Thank you Shiva for the words of appreciation.

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  17. Amrit Sinha23 January 2014 at 00:36

    This is too cute ... loved it :-)

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  18. Anonymous23 January 2014 at 17:05

    This is a very cute one and beautifully, sweetly written, ma'am:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/23/100-words-on-saturday-2014-3

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