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Saturday, 18 January 2014

Little did she know

Suman and Rakesh were dating for two years. Whenever Suman raised the topic of marriage, Rakesh  squirmed.Finally her parents announced that a boy was coming to see her. She entered the room listlessly. To her utter surprise she saw Rakesh .Little did she know that her father and Rakesh's father had made this plan.











Prompted by Write Tribe 55 on Friday # 2  Little did she know.

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30 comments:

  1. kalpana solsi18 January 2014 at 11:48

    ..................and I though he is commitment phobic. Nice ending Usha Maam.

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  2. Karan Shah18 January 2014 at 12:11

    cant get any better for the girl...beautifully penned :)

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    1. Unknown18 January 2014 at 16:44

      Thank you Karan. Thanks for the first visit. Keep in touch.

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  3. Nabanita18 January 2014 at 13:02

    Very nicely written :)

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  4. Aayesha S Hakim18 January 2014 at 13:06

    such a sweet surprise! :)

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  5. payal agarwal18 January 2014 at 13:11

    very nice! :)

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  6. Anonymous18 January 2014 at 15:45

    Oh Wow! Yours is the first one in the series that ended on a happy note...
    lovely post

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    1. Unknown18 January 2014 at 16:56

      Thank you Sheela for such encouraging comments.

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  7. Cifar18 January 2014 at 16:00

    very nice take on the prompt

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    1. Unknown18 January 2014 at 16:58

      Thank you Cifar Shayar . I am glad you liked it.

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  8. Rama Ananth18 January 2014 at 21:39

    Nice story, I liked the ending.

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  9. Shilpa Garg18 January 2014 at 22:59

    Lovely and how nice!! :)

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    1. Unknown19 January 2014 at 13:05

      Thank you Shilpa. Your appreciation means a lot to me.

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  10. Rajlakshmi19 January 2014 at 05:44

    hehhe that's so sweet :D

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  11. padmaja19 January 2014 at 07:46

    Such a positive little story, only you can tell it in a few words effectively, loved it Usha!

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    1. Unknown19 January 2014 at 13:07

      Thanks Padmaja. Your words of appreciation have made my day.

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  12. Prasanna Rao19 January 2014 at 15:40

    Glad that the ending was a happy one :) Yours is among the few ones that had a positive take on the prompt :)

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    1. Unknown19 January 2014 at 19:01

      Thanks PR for such encouraging remarks. Welcome to my site.

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  13. Sreeja Praveen20 January 2014 at 12:07

    I was reminded of the saying, " the guy who loves a girl and gets the same girl in an arranged marriage is the luckiest :P ". Superb, Usha Ma'm :)

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    1. Unknown20 January 2014 at 13:51

      Thank you Sreeja. This saying is correct for me too.

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  14. Reshma21 January 2014 at 04:45

    She is one lucky girl, a very feel-good 55er Ushaji :)

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 12:25

      Thank you Reshma. I wanted to give a happy ending.

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  15. Asha21 January 2014 at 09:55

    crisp and cute!

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  16. Unknown21 January 2014 at 15:14

    What a pleasant surprise. Nice to read a positive take on the prompt!

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