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Monday, 26 May 2014

Drift


cry,hurt,lonely
It just hurts


                                                      Lovers of yesterday
                                               Drift away , no love  no smile.
                                                        sit like strangers..




                                                          The music of love
                                                    no more a manna for him
                                                       notes turn discordant.




                                                           Why this drift
                                                   between the love birds,both
                                                         are now world apart.


                                                 

                                                      The stars and moon
                                               Witness to their sweet nothings ,
                                                        silently see her tears.


Prompted by Haiku Horizons 14th week prompt 'Drift'.
Pic. courtesy  Google

                                                            


                                                         
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30 comments:

  1. kalpana solsi26 May 2014 at 16:13

    The world does not exist when the lovers are together and when they drift they are world apart. sad but true.

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    1. Unknown26 May 2014 at 16:34

      Yes Kalpana,love is like that! Thanks for the thoughtful comments.

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  2. Locomente26 May 2014 at 16:16

    Fist one is the best... Bitter truth!

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    1. Unknown26 May 2014 at 16:35

      Thank you Satya. This is love like a see saw.

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  3. Sushree Dash26 May 2014 at 17:49

    These are so beautiful....i liked it a lot :)

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  4. Anonymous26 May 2014 at 22:18

    beautifully done!

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  5. Soumyaa Verma27 May 2014 at 00:26

    Very thoughtful presentation Usha ji :)

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 13:52

      Thanks a lot,Soumyaa, for stopping by to read this post.

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  6. Anonymous27 May 2014 at 07:43

    The moon and the stars see everything, don't they? :)

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 13:54

      Thanks Wabisabi. The moon and the stars are witness to her agony.

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  7. Unknown27 May 2014 at 10:21

    all haiku just superb!! loved them :)

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  8. rallentanda27 May 2014 at 11:10

    Love just does not last. It has permutations and changes into something you can live with or cannot. Human beings are complicated individuals,unpredictable and cannot be ever be fully understood.

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 13:57

      How true rallentanda! Human beings can hide many secrets behind the layers of the heart.

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  9. Rajlakshmi27 May 2014 at 18:45

    I just love how in few words you express so many emotions. Beautiful.

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 13:59

      Thanks Rajlakshmi. I am soooo happy that you liked it.

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  10. sulekkha27 May 2014 at 19:34

    Beautifully expressed, loved your poem.

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 14:00

      Thank you Sulekha. Glad for your words of appreciation.

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  11. Reshma28 May 2014 at 04:02

    The anguish of love turned sour is beautifully expressed in each of your Haiku Ushaji... I find it it difficult to choose a favorite among these 4, each one is exquisite.

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 14:04

      Thanks Reshma for such beautiful and touching comments.

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  12. Unknown28 May 2014 at 06:48

    I absolutely love the first one best!! Pure brilliance in this collection of haiku! ♥

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 17:29

      Thank you Kathy. I am so happy that you liked this collection.

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  13. Sreeja Praveen28 May 2014 at 13:51

    Lovers, so true these days ! I love the way you've woven 'love' into this collection of Haikus !

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    1. Unknown28 May 2014 at 17:32

      When we weave something with 'love' it becomes lovely.

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  14. Jyotsna Bhatia30 May 2014 at 00:39

    So wonderfully written Usha Ma'am

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  15. Anonymous30 May 2014 at 10:40

    they are treasures ,....the first and the second one is so classical !

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    1. Unknown31 May 2014 at 15:21

      Thanks Rajkumar for the words of appreciation

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