Reminds me of a one word comment I made in a friends blog post on his narration of sights while he cycled at dawn around the city. It was vivid and typical morning life that he narrated. I wrote just one word in my comment." Venkateswara Suprabbhatham" and good Lord he was offended and deleted my comment from his post saying in private that my comment was trivial and did no justice to his post.
Something very nice about the temple bells, and on the other hand an alarm in the early morning is so irritating. However, I think we can do without the temple bells but we can't do without an alarm. Very good Haiku.
Beautiful haikus!
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Deletelol...the second one is hilarious..the first one is the topper...such soothing lines Ushaji :)
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DeleteLovely! The second one is so sweet and is a familiar scene in every home :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa. An alarm is a necessary evil.
DeleteThe first one is so divine and I can identify with the second one. A very different take of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana.
DeleteThat is wonderful way to wake and begin the day.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a one word comment I made in a friends blog post on his narration of sights while he cycled at dawn around the city. It was vivid and typical morning life that he narrated. I wrote just one word in my comment." Venkateswara Suprabbhatham" and good Lord he was offended and deleted my comment from his post saying in private that my comment was trivial and did no justice to his post.
Thank you Anil. I would welcome a comment , which your friend resisted.
DeleteSomething very nice about the temple bells, and on the other hand an alarm in the early morning is so irritating.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I think we can do without the temple bells but we can't do without an alarm.
Very good Haiku.
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DeleteI enjoyed reading both...
ReplyDeleteEspecially 2nd one... its so full of love!
Thanks Satya.
DeleteI really love the soothing chimes. Great take.
ReplyDeleteThank you Celestine.
DeleteLovely haiku for the prompt! ♥
ReplyDeleteFrom soothing to startling, loved the varying rings Ushaji :)
ReplyDeleteTHanks Reshma for such a musical comment.
Deleteits been ages since I woke up like that
ReplyDeleteThanks BK. You must be getting up leisurely.
DeleteThe second one is so cute :) And the first one is so serene.
ReplyDeleteThanks Beloo.
Deleteloved both the haiku....the first one is sublime...the second adorable :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Apoorva.
DeleteYes,true.One is serene and the other is disturbing.
ReplyDeleteThyank you Sarala.
DeleteNice set of haiku!:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Tarang.
DeleteTemple bells are lovely. I like the way you say Uff! Oof! It makes me laugh. I We say Ugh or Ah but I prefer Uff! I am going to copy this:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rallentanda. Thanks for liking Uff!
DeleteMorning alarms are dreaded :p
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit.
Deletethe first one is so spiritual !
ReplyDeleteThanks Raj kumar milan.
DeleteI completely agree about the ringing of the alarm clock: a total day disturber!
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Thanks MMT
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