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Sunday, 11 May 2014

She realised that she could no longer hide the truth.

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Nimmi was ready to go to office when her mom said, " Don't  go today. A boy is coming to see you." Nimmi was startled  and realised that she could no longer hide the truth.  She told her mother about Suresh and said she  would never marry another man.Her mother called the boy's mother and cancelled the  appointment.
Next day Suresh  asked her why she had refused to see the boy. She asked,"How do you know?" Suresh replied," I told my parents about you and we were coming to your house. Now everything  is lost."  Nimmi sighed,"Oh no!"

Written in response to Write Tribe  100 words on Saturday  prompt ," she realised she could no longer hide the truth"
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27 comments:

  1. Sitara11 May 2014 at 15:58

    Oh a twisted one...
    nice one Ma'm

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    1. Unknown11 May 2014 at 20:01

      Thanks Sitara. You are welcome to my site.

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  2. Sreeja Praveen11 May 2014 at 17:14

    oho :O I hope they put it right ! Nimmi and Suresh can talk to both sets of parents together :)

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    1. Unknown11 May 2014 at 20:03

      Thank you Sreeja. I got inspiration from your stories to give a last twist.

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    2. Archana K B20 May 2014 at 11:43

      I was about to say that.. your stories have the same kind of twist just like Sreeja gives to her stories... last minute jhatka!!! :)

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  3. kalpana solsi11 May 2014 at 18:09

    Nothing is lost , Nimmi and Suresh can still sort out the matter.

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  4. Beloo Mehra11 May 2014 at 18:35

    Oh no! Hope the young ones find a way to sort it all out :)

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  5. sulekkha11 May 2014 at 19:15

    Loved the twist in the tale :) Superb post.

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    1. Unknown11 May 2014 at 20:09

      Thanks Sulekha for an inspiring comment.

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  6. Shilpa Garg11 May 2014 at 19:18

    Oh!! That was a nice twist! Am sure they will meet again, soon :)

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    1. Unknown11 May 2014 at 20:10

      Thanks Shilpa. We must always be optimistic.

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  7. Jyotsna Bhatia11 May 2014 at 20:03

    Whaatt.. Omg.. that was a nice surprise.. Hopefully things will be fine :)

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    1. Unknown11 May 2014 at 20:13

      Thank you Jyotsna for the nice comments.

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  8. Unknown11 May 2014 at 22:11

    Holy crap!! NO WAY!!! That was quite a twist! Nicely done! ♥

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  9. Jayanta11 May 2014 at 22:57

    Hope they get back on track-- a hasty decision by Nimmi and a nice twist, Ushaji :-)

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  10. Nabanita12 May 2014 at 15:46

    Oh no!! That was such a hasty decision! What a twist I must say

    Reflections on A2Z Challenge-Random Thoughts Naba

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  11. PRATIK KIRVE13 May 2014 at 14:13

    Ohhh.... I hope she made it right afterwards!!

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    1. Unknown13 May 2014 at 14:20

      Thanks Pratik . Welcome to this space.

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  12. Swathi Shenoy14 May 2014 at 06:56

    oh thats so sad! this is what happens if there is communication gap! good one ma'am :)

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    1. Unknown15 May 2014 at 06:59

      Thank you Swathi. Along with communication gap, there is generation gap

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  13. Unknown14 May 2014 at 16:46

    ha ha good one ma'm :) Nice mother she is, to cancel the plan as soon as she hears about the affair!! :)

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    1. Unknown15 May 2014 at 07:32

      Thank you Shanmuga for the nice comment. Regarding the mother's role, the clarification is (a) In a story of 100 words there are some limitations. It has to be presumed. (b) In this case the guests were coming the same evening. You can interpret that she postponed the visit.It was not a denial right away.She cancelled the appointment for that day.

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