This poem is the story of a woman, discarded, rejected and forsaken by her own world. She is lonely, even though surrounded by people all around. Her own world has given her scars,which can never heal. Feel the agony of her soul in the nonet, (a poem written in nine lines. The first line has one word, the second line has two and so on. The last lines has nine words.
Lonely
Lonely
Lonely heart
No one to console
No one to peep inside
Lonely heart, wants you dear
Where to look, whom to confess
Will you ever see the inner wound?
Alas! No one to see the broken heart
Leave the world, leave the pain, none to move.
Yes,Ushai in her agony her own self to console her.Nice poem in forty five words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala
DeleteAwesome...both poetry and theidea of nine
ReplyDeleteA lovely nonet describing the agony of a lady.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalpana
DeleteBeautiful poem, Usha Ma'am on her agony and what she goes throw. It's powerful, gritty and so touching.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal
DeleteThat was a interesting exercise .Said well.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anil
DeleteYou have brought out the pain of being left alone with none to care beautifully in so few words Ushaji.
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma.
Deletebeautifully composed and quite a challenge with the limitations given. Loved the nonet.
ReplyDeleteNice nonet Usha aunty, it is always difficult to write one.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Arpita. Glad you liked it.
DeleteThank you Arpita. Glad you liked it.
DeleteVery poignant. And very nicely done in nonet form.
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