Meeta's father booked a resort for Meeta and her husband Rakesh, in Taiwan. It was raining when they reached Taiwan.They stayed in a hotel near the airport. An old man followed them and said," You were going to the beach resort tonight, but stayed here due to rain." The couple was stunned. The man continued," Any newly wedded couple ,who occupies the room dies mysteriously. Don't go there." Meeta and Rakesh,without paying any heed to the old man's words, went to the resort. The room was perfect for a honeymoon. The couple died before they consummated their honeymoon.
This post is written in response to Write Tribe prompt 100 words on Saturday # 15. Pic courtesy Write Tribe
The hotel room looks perfect for a honeymoon but maybe it was cursed.? ( I do not believe in superstitions)
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma. Even I do not believe in superstitions, but to build a story I used it.
DeleteVery well etched, Usha Ma'am. Thrilling and heart pounding spooky end. Mystery tale very well woven and rushed adrenaline down the spine.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal . I am glad that you liked this piece of fiction.
DeleteOops! That's one scary tale!! Poor couple!! Very interesting take on this picture prompt, Ma'am :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa.
DeleteWhat a sad story :(
ReplyDeleteI think all possible ideas on this picture prompt are now taken! But this one is a spooky one!
Thanks Beloo. Thanks for reading it.
DeleteWow !!! Loved the twist you gave it towards the end :)
ReplyDeleteThanks A for liking this post. Thanks for dropping by.
Deleteanother tragic tale associated with this beautiful pic... :)
ReplyDeletehopped onto the post after reading Shilpa's...
Thank you Archana. Happy you liked this.
DeleteOh my God .....scary ...good one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Dr. Sushree.
DeleteCreepy!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit.
Deleteoh why oh why!!! that's so sad.
ReplyDeleteRajlakshmi thanks.
DeleteScary story...Many strange but true happenings defy logic
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma. It is true that many things defy logic.
DeleteI'm sorry they died :( I wish they knew it was haunted :(
ReplyDeleteI liked your comments, Sreeja.
DeleteOh, how sad :( Newly wed never pay heed to any sort of advice :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shanmuga Priya Raj Kumar. They did not pay heed to the advice and had to facee the worst.
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