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Monday, 19 May 2014

Too much for a teen ager

                                                        


A sixteen year Mohan  told his mother,"I know the truth".  Mother gave him five hundred rupees and said Don't tell  anyone. Mohan told the same words to his father who gave him thousand rupees and told not to tell anyone. Outside he saw the postman and repeated the same . The postman jumped and said,"Finally you know. Come  hug me my son."Mohan was shocked and started running away from the postman.This was too much for a teenager. He wished he knew then, what he knew now. Suddenly he jumped in front of a speeding truck and died .
This Prompt is written in response to Write Tribe100 words  on Wednesday. and the topic is He wished he knew then,what he knew now.








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30 comments:

  1. Beloo Mehra19 May 2014 at 14:24

    This is quite a story! It would seem that some truths are best left hidden! But what a tragic end.

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    1. Unknown19 May 2014 at 18:50

      Yes Beloo some times truth also becomes unbearable. Parda pada rahe to theek hota hai.

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  2. Shaivi19 May 2014 at 16:51

    Wow! What a take on the prompt!

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  3. rudraprayaga19 May 2014 at 18:13

    Saddening end.Nice,madam.

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  4. Shilpa Garg19 May 2014 at 20:34

    Gosh! What a shock it must be for Mohan!! And what a tragic end!

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  5. Unknown19 May 2014 at 20:38

    Thank you Shilpa. In the teens such a revelation must be devastating.

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  6. Unknown19 May 2014 at 22:20

    WOW, what a twist at the end! Sad but great story! ♥

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    1. Unknown20 May 2014 at 16:21

      Thank you Kathy.I am glad you liked it.

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  7. Jayanta20 May 2014 at 00:20

    This kid could not face the truth...Sad to see ending his life. Good one.

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    1. Unknown20 May 2014 at 16:22

      It was too much for a kid. Thank you Jayanta.

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  8. Reshma20 May 2014 at 05:10

    Oh dear, some truths are better hidden.

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  9. Archana K B20 May 2014 at 11:30

    Twisty tales... too much indeed.. :)

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  10. Rahul Bhatia20 May 2014 at 13:46

    Unusual story and imaginative word play, Ushaji!

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    1. Unknown20 May 2014 at 16:29

      Thank you Rahul.. It is nice to see you here after a long time.

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  11. Cifar20 May 2014 at 14:35

    It was an old whatsapp joke to which you gave a sad end

    Survivor

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  12. Rohan Kachalia20 May 2014 at 14:44

    What a tragic twist in the end! Some truths are better hidden.

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  13. Soumyaa Verma21 May 2014 at 01:07

    That was such a write up! The end was tragic, but had me chuckling somehow. Loved it.

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    1. Unknown22 May 2014 at 15:31

      Thank you Soumyaa for liking this post. Thanks for dropping by.

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  14. Shailaja V21 May 2014 at 12:12

    This was so shocking! I love the twist. It sounded all funny when it began. Wonderful work, Usha Madam :)

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  15. Sreeja Praveen22 May 2014 at 14:32

    Why did he have to die :( :(
    Started on a funny note...but the end was tragic. Lovely work :)

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    1. Unknown22 May 2014 at 15:34

      Thankes Sreeja. Teenagers are very emotional, so I thought of this ending.

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  16. Anonymous23 May 2014 at 21:04

    That's sad. I love the way you prolonged the mystery in the most competent manner and it touched the heart. The end was breathtaking and thrilling, Ma'am.
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/05/22/100-words-on-saturday-100-words-on-saturday-2014-14/

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    1. Unknown24 May 2014 at 20:01

      Thank you Vishal. Glad that you liked it.

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