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Tuesday, 21 July 2015

Sweep Haiku

                                                                  In  one sweep
                                             rich man's wealth looted
                                             family stunned.


Written for Haiku Horizons Prompt # Sweep


Linked to Facebook five day haiku challenge.
                                                   
                                                                
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20 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 July 2015 at 11:28

    The Haiku leaves such an impact on how time can change so many things in one's life.

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  2. Sunshine-struck21 July 2015 at 15:16

    How life can change in a moment! Nice take.

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  3. Anonymous21 July 2015 at 18:05

    Life is unpredictable! Nicely done!

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  4. Pat R21 July 2015 at 21:35

    From moment to moment you just don't know what is coming to you. Life.

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    1. Unknown22 July 2015 at 07:23

      Yes very true. No one can predict the future.

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  5. Pat R21 July 2015 at 21:35

    From moment to moment you just don't know what is coming to you. Life.

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  6. Pat R21 July 2015 at 21:35

    From moment to moment you just don't know what is coming to you. Life.

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  7. kalpana solsi21 July 2015 at 22:30

    Fate can sweep off any treasures. Thoughtful haiku.

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    1. Unknown22 July 2015 at 07:26

      Yes Kalpana, no one can predict what fate has in store for us.

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  8. Shilpa Garg22 July 2015 at 20:28

    Oh yes, it can all change in a wink of an eye!

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  9. Unknown24 July 2015 at 01:36

    oh! The unpredictability of life!! :-) Lovely one, ma'am! :-)
    Cheers, Archana - www.drishti.co

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    1. Unknown24 July 2015 at 10:02

      Yes Archana none can predict what is going to happen in the next moment.

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  10. Alice25 July 2015 at 23:57

    This sounds like a stock-market gambler. Well captured.

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  11. Milan Rajkumar26 July 2015 at 10:06

    nice one ma'm !

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  12. Anonymous26 July 2015 at 11:58

    Ouch -- in a swish, in the blink of an eye --- nicely done

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