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Saturday, 11 July 2015

Warm Rain


This is a Tan Renga. A  three line Haiku is given. The goal is to complete the Haiku by a two line Haiku

                                                                   

                                                                The warm rain
                                                            the spring moon appears
                                                                   to the rusty can.

                                                                       uchang

                                                               kids have fun
                                                          splash rusty can water.





The Tan Renga Challenge # 93 U Chang's  Warm Rain 

6 comments:

  1. aww..nice! I feel like splashing in the rain too!

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    1. Thank you Titli.Those days , when we were small were wonderful.

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  2. I can see the children laughing and splashing--and then their mothers scolding them! (Why do mothers do that, anyway?)

    To the Rusty Can

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