You
remember
this is the place
we met here everyday
you were always late,smiling
as if nothing happened. A giggle
and a laughter from so many friends
made me feel awkward and embarrassed.
Naughty girl you, i can not
think of such a sweet smile.
only you can surprise others with such action
You remember your pranks which we all loved
lost in rooms so huge, and full of people.
time has withered it, stands here alone
how huge this tree has become
cant imagine how small
it was then.my house
mom's anger to
quieten us
silence
alone.
99 words
Written for Friday Fictioneers
Dear Usha,
ReplyDeleteUnique form. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle for liking it.
ReplyDeleteA remarkably different presenation. Good job.
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DeleteA lovely poem, and an interesting presentaton. I like it.
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DeleteI loved your shape poetry. Very well done. :)
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