River's arduous journey since birth,
facing hurdles aplenty,flows up and down
mingles in mother ocean's lap.
River crosses all hurdles
The goal is far,Move on, move on
to rest in your love's arms.
Written in response to Carpe Diem # 563 prompt 'River'
pics courtesy(i) google
(ii) carpe diem
River is powerful ... beautiful haiku :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit
Deletebeautiful imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala.
DeleteLovely haiku Usha !
ReplyDelete"River crosses all hurdles" Right you are! There aren't many things that can stop a river.
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Thank you MMT.Yes nothing can prevent it to reach its goal.
DeleteLove the ever moving feeling I get with this wonderful couplet of haiku ... beautiul.
ReplyDeleteThank you Georgia for the sweet comments.
DeleteTwo very different looks at the river flow - the first very philosophical, second nicely romantic! Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Hamish Gunn for the inspiring comments.
DeleteThe romancy of the river.. beautiful
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you liked it,Bjorn.
DeleteArduous journey for sure. We visited several glaciers in Canada that fed rivers leading to four bodies of water, Arctic, Gulf of Mexico, Atlantic and Pacific.
ReplyDeleteWow, it must have been a very thrilling experience.
DeleteMen may come and men may go..
ReplyDeleteThank you ,my dear Rajita. So you found some time for Dadi.You have made my day!
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