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Tuesday, 14 May 2013

Bridges Haiku

        

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                         She wept bitterly
                                                                                                                                 across seven seas he went

                           never to return                                             
                                                                                       


                                                                                        
Free Happy Couple In New Place Stock Images - 2251614                                           regression   in mind

                                    feeling lost, back he came 

                                              never to  leave.


Inspired  by the theme 'bridges'
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29 comments:

  1. Locomente14 May 2013 at 11:58

    Soc cute..
    Magical love!

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    1. Unknown14 May 2013 at 14:53

      Thank you Satya. True love IS magical.

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  2. Nanka14 May 2013 at 12:08

    A runaway hurled back over the bridges she built!! ;)

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    1. Unknown14 May 2013 at 14:55

      Thank you Nanka.True love pulled him back.

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  3. Shilpa Garg14 May 2013 at 12:21

    Aha! That's sweet! :)

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  4. Gemma Wiseman14 May 2013 at 13:16

    Love can be a wonderful bridge!

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    1. Unknown14 May 2013 at 14:57

      Yes Gamma. True love can indeed be a bridge.

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  5. KISLAYA GOPAL14 May 2013 at 13:39

    In the first one 'never to return'
    the second one ' never to leave'
    Loved both of them and the way it has been used!

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    1. Unknown14 May 2013 at 15:00

      Thankyou Kislaya You have rightly noticed. This was in my mind when I wrote it.

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  6. Anonymous14 May 2013 at 14:01

    Gorgeous haikus both of them!

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  7. Rahul Bhatia14 May 2013 at 15:24

    Lovely Haiku Ushaji:)

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  8. Anonymous14 May 2013 at 15:51

    The power of love. Wonderful haiku

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  9. Anonymous15 May 2013 at 02:23

    You drug me through an emotional pit with the first one. I'm glad there was a happy ending to follow.

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    1. Unknown15 May 2013 at 10:05

      Thanks for the lovely comments. I'll cherish them.

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  10. Anonymous15 May 2013 at 08:23

    Very touching! I'm glad you ended it on a happy note.

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  11. Unknown15 May 2013 at 10:07

    Thanks a ton for your comments. Happy you liked the ending.

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  12. Judith Westerfield16 May 2013 at 02:39

    Love, perhaps the ONLY bridge - very very nice

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    1. Unknown16 May 2013 at 10:41

      Welcome Judith to my site. Yes you are right. TRUE LOVE is the only sweet, tender and everlasting bridge.

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  13. Reshma16 May 2013 at 02:54

    the bridge of love that connects hearts, beautiful Haiku ma'am :)

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    1. Unknown16 May 2013 at 10:47

      Thanks Reshma for stopping here.True love is a strengthening and everlasting bond.
      Your comments are valuable for me. Keep visiting.

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  14. Rohan Kachalia16 May 2013 at 15:55

    True Love never leaves, Never! Lovely writing!! :)

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    1. Unknown16 May 2013 at 16:25

      Welcome to my site ,Rohan. You are right 'true love is everlasting.

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  15. Panchali17 May 2013 at 16:25

    Aah, bridging with love sounds so beautiful. Very poetic...lovely!

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  16. Saru Singhal17 May 2013 at 21:39

    The beauty of love, distance multiplies it and we value it more. Beautiful haiku.

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  17. Unknown18 May 2013 at 07:35

    Thank you Saryu,You are right. Distance lends charm in the minds of lovers.

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