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Tuesday, 14 May 2013

Bridges Haiku

        

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                         She wept bitterly
                                                                                                                                 across seven seas he went

                           never to return                                             
                                                                                       


                                                                                        
Free Happy Couple In New Place Stock Images - 2251614                                           regression   in mind

                                    feeling lost, back he came 

                                              never to  leave.


Inspired  by the theme 'bridges'
                                                                      Pics  courtesy  google

29 comments:

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    1. Thank you Satya. True love IS magical.

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  2. A runaway hurled back over the bridges she built!! ;)

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    1. Thank you Nanka.True love pulled him back.

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  3. Love can be a wonderful bridge!

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    1. Yes Gamma. True love can indeed be a bridge.

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  4. In the first one 'never to return'
    the second one ' never to leave'
    Loved both of them and the way it has been used!

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    1. Thankyou Kislaya You have rightly noticed. This was in my mind when I wrote it.

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    1. Thanks a lot mlm(mindlovemisery)

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  6. The power of love. Wonderful haiku

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  7. You drug me through an emotional pit with the first one. I'm glad there was a happy ending to follow.

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    1. Thanks for the lovely comments. I'll cherish them.

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  8. Very touching! I'm glad you ended it on a happy note.

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  9. Thanks a ton for your comments. Happy you liked the ending.

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  10. Love, perhaps the ONLY bridge - very very nice

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    1. Welcome Judith to my site. Yes you are right. TRUE LOVE is the only sweet, tender and everlasting bridge.

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  11. the bridge of love that connects hearts, beautiful Haiku ma'am :)

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    1. Thanks Reshma for stopping here.True love is a strengthening and everlasting bond.
      Your comments are valuable for me. Keep visiting.

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  12. True Love never leaves, Never! Lovely writing!! :)

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    1. Welcome to my site ,Rohan. You are right 'true love is everlasting.

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  13. Aah, bridging with love sounds so beautiful. Very poetic...lovely!

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  14. The beauty of love, distance multiplies it and we value it more. Beautiful haiku.

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  15. Thank you Saryu,You are right. Distance lends charm in the minds of lovers.

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