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Saturday, 11 May 2013

story Haiku summer heat


                                      Summer heat  is my post for Haiku Prompts246 Story

                     Unbearable summer heat
                 piercing sun  arouses thirst  sweat
                            water brings relief

                                                                                               
                                                      


                                                              
                            

                                                 Boys  girls have                                                
                                 glee  pleasure amusement and mirth
                                          splash water endlessly 
                                                                                  


                      Mother warns children
                   stop playing,exams  ahead
                           don't fall sick
                                                                                    
                     
                         
                                                           

                                                                                                


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15 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 May 2013 at 20:53

    These are wonderful and vivid =)

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  2. Saru Singhal11 May 2013 at 22:09

    All is summed up in this beautiful post. The fun, heat and worries of summer.

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    1. Unknown13 May 2013 at 07:42

      Thanks a lot Saru. It is always fun playing with water.

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  3. KISLAYA GOPAL11 May 2013 at 23:06

    wonderful haiku, summer is really getting miserable, the cascade of haiku denote different aspect of summer season :)

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    1. Unknown13 May 2013 at 08:04

      Thanks Kislaya for your your encouraging comments.

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  4. Anonymous12 May 2013 at 05:58

    Very nice and calming. Cool off from the summer heat.

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    1. Unknown13 May 2013 at 08:06

      Welcome to my post Alice. Thanks for the lovely comments.

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  5. The Write Girl12 May 2013 at 07:31

    This reminds me of school break. I miss those long vacations, sigh. Fantastic haiku.

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    1. Unknown13 May 2013 at 08:09

      Wecome to my post Write Girl. Shool days were real fun. No responsibility and worries.

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  6. Shilpa Garg12 May 2013 at 16:38

    Good ones... all mothers can relate to the last one :)

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    1. Unknown13 May 2013 at 08:11

      Thanks Shilpa. It is real fun when we see the children enjoying.

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  7. Ramesh Sood12 May 2013 at 22:35

    Well...Iiked the last one more..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-stories-all-spillhaiku.html

    RS

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    1. Unknown13 May 2013 at 08:13

      Welcome to my site Ramesh. Thanks for your valuable comments.

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  8. Reshma16 May 2013 at 02:53

    summer story brought back a lot of wonderful memories... esp mother's warning :P

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  9. Unknown16 May 2013 at 10:51

    Thank you Reshma for the sweeet comments. In spite of mother's warning, children will not leave playing with water..

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