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Tuesday, 7 May 2013

Dare Devils two

                 ' Dare devil twins' is my post for Haiku Prompts245 Dare Devil


    



                                    Sam,Tom daredevils
                                  twins,hit nag tease trouble
                                     throw lizards cockroach



                                                                                   
                                                        Clap,laugh, enjoy
                                            fed up neighbours close doors
                                                       twosome play alone



                                                                                          Sam injured,dog
                                                                                   bites,none  to  help them out
                                                                                         shameful devils reformed.
 















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29 comments:

  1. oh this is a great story through your haiku.

    reminds me of a story I read during my childhood days where 'bhola' used to lie a lot and once a tiger came, he shouted for help, but no one came to his help thinking that he is lying again!

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    1. Thank you Kislaya. I also had the same story in mind.I am happy you liked my Haiku.

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  2. Something unfortunate can stifle a mischievous run from continuing. Poetic justice demands it! Nicely Usha!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you Kaykuaia for your inspiring comments.

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  3. Are you a twin? Sounds like you speak from experience ;-) "Devils" daring each other.

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    1. Thank you, Maggie. I am amused that you thought that I am a twin. I am not a twin,but my sister has twins and I have seen them groiwng up very closely.Their pranks and actions were very cute. I became nostalgic!!

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    1. Thank you Claudia for your comments.

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  5. A wonderful story in few words! Great going, Ma'am! :)

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    1. Thank you Shilpa. I feel encouraged.

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  6. Ah the story of terrible twins..double trouble:)

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    1. Thanks Rallentanda for liking the story.

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  7. PS
    just read your profile
    Heartfelt and warm...very nice!

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    1. Thanks for the appreciative remarks

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  9. hahaa....lovely lovely set of haiku. Even if they are notorious..Little daredevils are adorable. Loved reading...:))

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    1. Hi Panchali It is only your inspiration,which prompted me to write. Even I loved the twin brothers .They are cute.

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  10. Nice composition! Two naughty white boys got a lesson for life!

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    1. Thank you SM.Welcome to my site.

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  12. Interesting haiku ma'am. loved the double dose of mischief :)

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    1. Thank you Reshma for your words of appreciation.

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  13. Aha!dare devils trouble you.Nice.

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