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Tuesday, 7 May 2013

Dare Devils two

                 ' Dare devil twins' is my post for Haiku Prompts245 Dare Devil


    



                                    Sam,Tom daredevils
                                  twins,hit nag tease trouble
                                     throw lizards cockroach

                                                                                   
                                                        Clap,laugh, enjoy
                                            fed up neighbours close doors
                                                       twosome play alone

                                                                                          Sam injured,dog
                                                                                   bites,none  to  help them out
                                                                                         shameful devils reformed.
 















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29 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 May 2013 at 18:24

    Nicely fun

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  2. KISLAYA GOPAL7 May 2013 at 19:40

    oh this is a great story through your haiku.

    reminds me of a story I read during my childhood days where 'bhola' used to lie a lot and once a tiger came, he shouted for help, but no one came to his help thinking that he is lying again!

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    1. Unknown8 May 2013 at 09:37

      Thank you Kislaya. I also had the same story in mind.I am happy you liked my Haiku.

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  3. kaykuala7 May 2013 at 22:15

    Something unfortunate can stifle a mischievous run from continuing. Poetic justice demands it! Nicely Usha!

    Hank

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    1. Unknown8 May 2013 at 09:41

      Thank you Kaykuaia for your inspiring comments.

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  4. Maggie Grace7 May 2013 at 22:17

    Are you a twin? Sounds like you speak from experience ;-) "Devils" daring each other.

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    1. Unknown8 May 2013 at 11:24

      Thank you, Maggie. I am amused that you thought that I am a twin. I am not a twin,but my sister has twins and I have seen them groiwng up very closely.Their pranks and actions were very cute. I became nostalgic!!

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  5. Claudia7 May 2013 at 22:36

    Fun haiku! I like it! :)

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  6. Shilpa Garg7 May 2013 at 22:37

    A wonderful story in few words! Great going, Ma'am! :)

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  7. Found In Folsom7 May 2013 at 22:50

    Sweet little story :)

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  8. rallentanda8 May 2013 at 06:41

    Ah the story of terrible twins..double trouble:)

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    1. Unknown8 May 2013 at 12:41

      Thanks Rallentanda for liking the story.

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  9. rallentanda8 May 2013 at 06:43

    PS
    just read your profile
    Heartfelt and warm...very nice!

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  10. Anonymous8 May 2013 at 11:09

    This is so cute!

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  11. Panchali8 May 2013 at 11:14

    hahaa....lovely lovely set of haiku. Even if they are notorious..Little daredevils are adorable. Loved reading...:))

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    1. Unknown8 May 2013 at 13:05

      Hi Panchali It is only your inspiration,which prompted me to write. Even I loved the twin brothers .They are cute.

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  12. Giribala8 May 2013 at 22:50

    Nice composition! Two naughty white boys got a lesson for life!

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  13. SM8 May 2013 at 23:22

    sweet story

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  14. Reshma11 May 2013 at 03:15

    Interesting haiku ma'am. loved the double dose of mischief :)

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    1. Unknown11 May 2013 at 09:56

      Thank you Reshma for your words of appreciation.

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  15. rudraprayaga14 May 2013 at 23:32

    Aha!dare devils trouble you.Nice.

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