northern lights

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Tuesday, 16 July 2013

Rain Haiku

Haiku   Rain
                     dark  night clouds
                roaring, thumping,deafening, scary
                      kids  behind sheets.







Written in response to Ruchira's Haiku  for Write Tribe

18 comments:

  1. sweet! my little one is scared of the thunder too and that's exactly what he does....hide under a sheet!

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    1. How cute! My daughter is now married. She is still scared of thunder.

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  2. As kids while we enjoyed getting drenched in rain, the thunder was enough to send us into the home :) Very nicely composed Ushaji:)

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    1. Thank you Reshma. All children are scared of thunder.

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    1. Thanks a lot Ruchira. Welcome to my site.

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  4. It is a prelude , the rain hasn't dropped yet!

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    1. Rains have started here. If not much, thunder is there to scare the kids.

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  5. Beautiful imagery...lovely Haiku. You are doing great on write tribe and other prompts!! Great job..

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    1. Thank you Panchali. I am still a novice. I have learnt a lot from you!

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  6. This is a beautiful visual haiku :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Amrit. Welcome to my site.

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  7. That was fun haiku. I liked the last line :)

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    1. Thanks Megha. Kids really are scared of thunder.

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  8. that was a cute Haiku :)

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