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Wednesday, 25 September 2013

Haiku Heights # Den September Heights Day 25









                 Dingy, dark, dirty

            Secluded,stinky,solitary, sober,cell

                 trapped in delusion.
                                               
                                                     
               
     
             



                                                   




                          

                              

                           Simple,sanguine, serene

                        with my computer, and phone 

                                       I love my den.





                             Prompted by  Haiku Heights # Den      September Heights Day 25 

                                                 pics  courtesy google








32 comments:

  1. Second one, spot on ! First one, a sad reality for many, women in particular !!

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    1. Thank you Sreeja. All bloggers can relate to the second one.

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  2. @1st Haiku
    Sad... Yet so true...

    @2nd haiku
    I agree too!!!

    Nice madam :)

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    1. Thank you Satya.I am glad you liked this.

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  3. The contrast between the two is well made. You should give thanks that you are in the second situation.There is so much suffering in the world!

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    1. Thank you Rallentanda. Thank you for your words of appreciation.

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    2. Nice,madam. Laddles,wares,vegetables
      I am ho!Busy in my den.

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    3. Thank you Sarala, Our den keeps us occupied.

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  4. Both are nicely written ..... having their own fragrances and colors

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    1. Thank you Sheela for your sweet and fragrant comments.

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  5. both very vivid images and i particularly like the alliteration ........wonderful Ushaji...

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    1. Thank you Sumana for the wonderful comments. Only you noticed the alliteration.

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  6. Trapped in delusions is probably one of the worst places in the world to be!

    Three Dens with Geese

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  7. Amazing contrast. The first one a stark reality and the second one, well, very refreshing!

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    1. Thank you Catherine. Your comments always motivate me.

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    1. Yes Shilpa, this is the story of every blogger. Is'nt it?

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  9. I particularly liked the first one, especially that great last line.

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    1. Thanks mjshorts, for your words of appreciation. Welcome to my site.

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  10. there is always light after dark tunnel

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    1. Thanks Mr. Pathan. There is hope till we live.

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  11. Lovely...next time when I'm in Delhi, I am going to visit your den. Beautiful set, Usha :)

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    1. Thank you Panchali. You are most welcome to my den.

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  12. Second one sounds so much closer home

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    1. Yes Bhuvanesh, every blog writer can relate to it.

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  13. The negative of the first and the positive of the second with solitude as a common factor has been brought out beautifully .

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