This is my first attempt of writing a Haiku. I dont know how far I have been able to manage it. I am open to suggestions. There is always a ray of hope if, not now some day I may succeed!!
Sun blue sky
Warring clouds under fighting sun
greens enjoying below .
Pics courtesy google
Rainbow's wish fulfilled ?
Sun blue sky
Warring clouds under fighting sun
greens enjoying below .
A desolate tree
Grieve not desolate
meloncoly men ,leave no hope
happiness will prevail .
Pics courtesy google
Simply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI admire you, Ma'am for trying out new things, learning and experimenting, and so keen at observing too! Kudos to you :)
Thanks a lot Shilpa .I feel elated by your encouraging comments.
ReplyDeleteYou are an inspiring soul ,Usha maám..Always ready to learn and experiment new things ..You spread lots of positive energy..and I really adore you for that..Kudos to your spirit !!Lovely set of Haiku..Keep writing ..
ReplyDeleteP.S I am a bit irregular these days on blogosphere..pardon me for that.
Thanks Odizzey. Your inspiring comments matter a lot to me. It is because of the encouragment of friends like you, that I get motivated.
DeleteGood attempt!
ReplyDeleteThank you Anil.,for your inspiring remarks.
Deletefirst attempt, though a very beautiful one ! you have imbibed it very well enough. looking forward to more from you:)
ReplyDeleteI feel encouraged to write more . Thanks for appreciating.
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