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Saturday, 7 December 2013

My hero

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My hero

We lived in a society flat. Krishan lived  alone in the building next to ours.  I could see his  window from my bedroom. Some times I saw him standing near the window, watching me from the corner of his eyes. If I looked at him he immediately turned his face.
                                Once I  had fever and did not see him for some days. I missed him. One evening I saw him entering our flat. My parents were by my side. He came inside. My pulse rate increased. The moment he entered a very soothing flavour of his after shave lotion  filled the atmosphere.His clean shaven face bowled me over. I realised I was in love! 
                                        We got married  within one month.He was a very lovable, humourous,  and considerate person.  I loved to gently pat his face, which was as smooth as a rose petal and fragrant like a lily. I loved to see his clean shaven face. To tease me he would say, I am going to keep a beard. I too lovingly said in that case I would divorce him. He would take me in his arms and whisper that even in his dream he will not have a beard!
This is purely a fictional story.

I am accepting Madam Panchali's and Kalpana Solsi's tag and writing in response to that.


I would like to tag my friends, Reshma, Padmaja and Shilpa Garg



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18 comments:

  1. 'Fictional story'!? :) Well, loved your story.

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Thank you Arvind. This is a fictional/cum real story. Thanks for the words of appreciation.

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  2. oh..i thought this was real!!! sweet!

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    1. Thank you Titli. Did you really think it was real? Ya, to some exent!

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  3. Ow, I don't think this is a fictional story, Usha. Lovely romantic story it is...enjoyed! Thanks for writing...:)

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    1. Thank you Panchali. This is a mixture of realityl and fiction. After all fiction is a mirror of reality. Is'nt it? Happy you liked it.

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  4. Lovely cute little short story, loved it :)

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    1. Thank you Jairam. Glad you liked it.

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  5. It felt so real Usha, loved the sentiment and sensitivity behind this cute little story :-)

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    1. Thank you Padmaja. for liking the story.

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  6. Wonderful story Ma'am. And thanks for tagging me. But am afraid, I'll not be able to participate in this contest. In case it is mandatory for the tagged members to write posts for this contest, then pls remove my name. All the very best for the contest :)

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    1. Thank you Shilpa. No problem, if you are not able to participate, forget it.

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  7. So real :) Beautifully done Usha :) :) :) I have tagged you here. Hope you will accept :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. Thank you SIS. I am glad you liked my story. Thanks for tagging me. OK. I will try to write.

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