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Friday 4 April 2014

Write Tribe prompt 2014 # 11 Just do it.

An old couple was on a road trip. They stopped at a roadside  cafe for a hot cup of tea. On  their  return journey,all of a sudden the old lady said,"Oh dear, I left my spectacles at the cafe. They had already travelled  forty kilometres. They travelled another ten kilometres, before they found  a U turn. The old man kept grumbling. These women! How forgetful!! I cannot tolerate all this!!!  Why are you  sitting dumb now? You put me in so much trouble ! You are enjoying !! He kept murmuring, till they reached the cafe. The old lady got down and turned to go inside. The old man  called her and said,"Darling, I left my umbrella and credit card there. Please bring them also".  His wife was stunned.She was about to explode but the old man said, "No questions, Just do it."



Written in response to Write Tribe Prompt 2014 # 11

15 comments:

  1. A sad existence..for the woman I mean...you've so beautifully portrayed two characters in so few words...

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  2. Very nicely portrayed...Enjoyed reading it...

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  3. Nice narration.. Men are men!

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    1. Thank you Shanmuga. Thanks for the visit'

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  4. Men and their egos...Nicely done Ushaji.

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  5. *Ha!* That sounds like something my husband would do/say....right before I told him he was sleeping on the couch that night. (just kidding). This story draws you in. I like it!

    LuAnn Braley
    AJ's Hooligans @AtoZChallenge
    Back Porchervations

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  6. Most men are like this :( Any mistake that we make is terrible, the same becomes ' forgetfulness' when they do it. And we're supposed to close our eyes :|

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  7. Oh!!! Men!!! You sure hit the nail on the head with this one! ♥

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