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Sunday, 4 May 2014

Lonely

 This poem is the story of a woman, discarded,  rejected and forsaken by her own world. She is lonely, even though surrounded by people all around. Her own  world has given her scars,which can  never heal. Feel the agony of her soul in the  nonet, (a poem  written in nine lines. The first line has one word, the second line has two and so on. The last lines has nine words.

Lonely
Lonely heart
No one to console
No one to peep inside
Lonely heart, wants you dear
Where to look, whom to confess
Will you ever see the inner wound?
Alas! No one to see the broken heart
Leave the world, leave the pain, none to  move.


18 comments:

  1. Yes,Ushai in her agony her own self to console her.Nice poem in forty five words.

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  2. Awesome...both poetry and theidea of nine

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  3. A lovely nonet describing the agony of a lady.

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  4. Beautiful poem, Usha Ma'am on her agony and what she goes throw. It's powerful, gritty and so touching.

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  5. That was a interesting exercise .Said well.

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  6. You have brought out the pain of being left alone with none to care beautifully in so few words Ushaji.

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  7. beautifully composed and quite a challenge with the limitations given. Loved the nonet.

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  8. Nice nonet Usha aunty, it is always difficult to write one.

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    1. Thanks a lot Arpita. Glad you liked it.

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    2. Thank you Arpita. Glad you liked it.

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  9. Very poignant. And very nicely done in nonet form.

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