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Sunday, 11 May 2014

She realised that she could no longer hide the truth.

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Nimmi was ready to go to office when her mom said, " Don't  go today. A boy is coming to see you." Nimmi was startled  and realised that she could no longer hide the truth.  She told her mother about Suresh and said she  would never marry another man.Her mother called the boy's mother and cancelled the  appointment.
Next day Suresh  asked her why she had refused to see the boy. She asked,"How do you know?" Suresh replied," I told my parents about you and we were coming to your house. Now everything  is lost."  Nimmi sighed,"Oh no!"



Written in response to Write Tribe  100 words on Saturday  prompt ," she realised she could no longer hide the truth"

27 comments:

  1. Oh a twisted one...
    nice one Ma'm

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    1. Thanks Sitara. You are welcome to my site.

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  2. oho :O I hope they put it right ! Nimmi and Suresh can talk to both sets of parents together :)

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    1. Thank you Sreeja. I got inspiration from your stories to give a last twist.

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    2. I was about to say that.. your stories have the same kind of twist just like Sreeja gives to her stories... last minute jhatka!!! :)

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  3. Nothing is lost , Nimmi and Suresh can still sort out the matter.

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  4. Oh no! Hope the young ones find a way to sort it all out :)

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    1. Lets hope for the best. Thanks Beloo.

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  5. Loved the twist in the tale :) Superb post.

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    1. Thanks Sulekha for an inspiring comment.

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  6. Oh!! That was a nice twist! Am sure they will meet again, soon :)

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    1. Thanks Shilpa. We must always be optimistic.

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  7. Whaatt.. Omg.. that was a nice surprise.. Hopefully things will be fine :)

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    1. Thank you Jyotsna for the nice comments.

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  8. Holy crap!! NO WAY!!! That was quite a twist! Nicely done! ♥

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  9. Hope they get back on track-- a hasty decision by Nimmi and a nice twist, Ushaji :-)

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  10. Oh no!! That was such a hasty decision! What a twist I must say

    Reflections on A2Z Challenge-Random Thoughts Naba

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  11. Ohhh.... I hope she made it right afterwards!!

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    1. Thanks Pratik . Welcome to this space.

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  12. oh thats so sad! this is what happens if there is communication gap! good one ma'am :)

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    1. Thank you Swathi. Along with communication gap, there is generation gap

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  13. ha ha good one ma'm :) Nice mother she is, to cancel the plan as soon as she hears about the affair!! :)

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    1. Thank you Shanmuga for the nice comment. Regarding the mother's role, the clarification is (a) In a story of 100 words there are some limitations. It has to be presumed. (b) In this case the guests were coming the same evening. You can interpret that she postponed the visit.It was not a denial right away.She cancelled the appointment for that day.

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