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Monday, 19 May 2014

Too much for a teen ager

                                                        


A sixteen year Mohan  told his mother,"I know the truth".  Mother gave him five hundred rupees and said Don't tell  anyone. Mohan told the same words to his father who gave him thousand rupees and told not to tell anyone. Outside he saw the postman and repeated the same . The postman jumped and said,"Finally you know. Come  hug me my son."Mohan was shocked and started running away from the postman.This was too much for a teenager. He wished he knew then, what he knew now. Suddenly he jumped in front of a speeding truck and died .


This Prompt is written in response to Write Tribe100 words  on Wednesday. and the topic is He wished he knew then,what he knew now.








30 comments:

  1. This is quite a story! It would seem that some truths are best left hidden! But what a tragic end.

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    1. Yes Beloo some times truth also becomes unbearable. Parda pada rahe to theek hota hai.

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  2. Wow! What a take on the prompt!

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    1. Thank you Shaivi. Welcome to my site.

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    1. Thanks Sarala. Glad you liked it.

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  4. Gosh! What a shock it must be for Mohan!! And what a tragic end!

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  5. Thank you Shilpa. In the teens such a revelation must be devastating.

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  6. WOW, what a twist at the end! Sad but great story! ♥

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    1. Thank you Kathy.I am glad you liked it.

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  7. This kid could not face the truth...Sad to see ending his life. Good one.

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    1. It was too much for a kid. Thank you Jayanta.

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  8. Oh dear, some truths are better hidden.

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    1. Yes Reshma. The news was unbearable.

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  9. Twisty tales... too much indeed.. :)

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    1. Thank you Archana. Welcome to my site

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  10. Unusual story and imaginative word play, Ushaji!

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    1. Thank you Rahul.. It is nice to see you here after a long time.

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  11. It was an old whatsapp joke to which you gave a sad end

    Survivor

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  12. What a tragic twist in the end! Some truths are better hidden.

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    1. Thanks Rohan..Welcome to this site.

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  13. That was such a write up! The end was tragic, but had me chuckling somehow. Loved it.

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    1. Thank you Soumyaa for liking this post. Thanks for dropping by.

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  14. This was so shocking! I love the twist. It sounded all funny when it began. Wonderful work, Usha Madam :)

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    1. Thank you Shailaja.Glad you liked it.

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  15. Why did he have to die :( :(
    Started on a funny note...but the end was tragic. Lovely work :)

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    1. Thankes Sreeja. Teenagers are very emotional, so I thought of this ending.

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  16. That's sad. I love the way you prolonged the mystery in the most competent manner and it touched the heart. The end was breathtaking and thrilling, Ma'am.
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/05/22/100-words-on-saturday-100-words-on-saturday-2014-14/

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    1. Thank you Vishal. Glad that you liked it.

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