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Monday, 27 January 2014

Haiku Heights #319 - Useless

                                                 

                            Sunny  back from school
                      broken pen, chalk, stones beads
                                 his"precious" items.



                                Useless weather
                       dark,dingy,drab,dreary days
                           gloomy ,grimy,murky.


        

                                 Down the hill
                  sombre,seedy shabby soiled
                            house,stands  alone..










 

Haiku Heights #319 - Useless




31 comments:

  1. A brilliant set, the first one is my favorite :-)

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  2. Live imagery :) we all have had such precious items from school :)

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  3. These are brilliant! I love the alliterations!

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    1. Thanks Celestine.Only you have noticed the alliterations.

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  4. Great collection of haiku. Love the imagery you created. ♥

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    1. Thanks Kathy. I appreciate your comments.

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  5. Your haiku evoke wonderful imagery. Nicely done!

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    1. Thank you Kedal Thorman. I am glad that you liked it.

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  6. Lovely trio Ushaji :) The first one reminded me of my oldest treasure chest :P

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  7. All three are fabulous for the prompt. In the first one, what's useless for us is so precious for the children :)

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    1. Thanks Shilpa. for your sweet comments.

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  8. I have had such precious collectibles too! Great haikus!

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    1. Thank you Titli.Glad you liked them. Where were you last few days? Missed you.

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  9. I like the first one with the boy and his precious finds. Very sweet and charming!

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    1. Thank you Rallentanda. for your cute comments.

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    1. Thank you Milan for the lovely comments.

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  11. I especially relate to "useless weather". But all are nice.

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    1. Thanks Alice. i am glad that you liked it.

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  12. Loved the set. You wrote well on the prompt. :)

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    1. Thank you Balqis for your words of appreciation.

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  13. I really loved the second one.. And the way it sounds!

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    1. Thank you Satya. I am glad that you liked it.

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  14. Nice sets of prose...captures life segments rather brilliantly♪

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    1. Thank you Lmkazmierczak for the comments.

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