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Saturday, 18 January 2014

Little did she know

Suman and Rakesh were dating for two years. Whenever Suman raised the topic of marriage, Rakesh  squirmed.Finally her parents announced that a boy was coming to see her. She entered the room listlessly. To her utter surprise she saw Rakesh .Little did she know that her father and Rakesh's father had made this plan.











Prompted by Write Tribe 55 on Friday # 2  Little did she know.

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31 comments:

  1. ..................and I though he is commitment phobic. Nice ending Usha Maam.

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  2. cant get any better for the girl...beautifully penned :)

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    1. Thank you Karan. Thanks for the first visit. Keep in touch.

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    1. Thanks Nabanita I am glad you liked it.

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    1. Thank Aayesha for the sweet comments.

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    1. Thank you Payal.Happy you liked it.

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  6. Oh Wow! Yours is the first one in the series that ended on a happy note...
    lovely post

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    1. Thank you Sheela for such encouraging comments.

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    1. Thank you Cifar Shayar . I am glad you liked it.

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  8. Nice story, I liked the ending.

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    1. Thank you Shilpa. Your appreciation means a lot to me.

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  10. Such a positive little story, only you can tell it in a few words effectively, loved it Usha!

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    1. Thanks Padmaja. Your words of appreciation have made my day.

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  11. Glad that the ending was a happy one :) Yours is among the few ones that had a positive take on the prompt :)

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    1. Thanks PR for such encouraging remarks. Welcome to my site.

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  12. I was reminded of the saying, " the guy who loves a girl and gets the same girl in an arranged marriage is the luckiest :P ". Superb, Usha Ma'm :)

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    1. Thank you Sreeja. This saying is correct for me too.

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  13. She is one lucky girl, a very feel-good 55er Ushaji :)

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    1. Thank you Reshma. I wanted to give a happy ending.

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  14. What a pleasant surprise. Nice to read a positive take on the prompt!

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