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Thursday 13 June 2013

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This is in response to  the prompt 7x7x7x7x7

The seventh book on my  bookshelf  is 'Divine Experiences' written by K. R. Vaidyathan.  It is a  publication of Bhartiya Vidya Bhawan., New Delhi. 
 On page  seven the words in the seventh line  are "As per Doctor's advice we asked our children to come back" .
            

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   Shobha was ill for the last several years.
  During summer holidays her grandchildren  came and stayed with her.
  The next day, after they left, she was admitted to a Hospital in an unconscious state.
  As per Doctor's advice we asked our children to come back.
  The children saw their  grandma in the ICU, frail and feeble.
  Her eyes  gleamed, with  a faint smile on her face.
  The Doctor said ," The worst is over. Now she will live". 


                                        


 

Inspired by Corinne Rodrigues prompt 7x7x7x7
Write Tribe Prompt



24 comments:

  1. That's great! Liked the positive note it ended on! :)

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    1. Thank you Shilpa. This my first attempt in this sort of prompt.

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  2. That's so positive.. Usha.. :)

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  3. Good that the worst was over... the grandchildren would have given her morale a boost for sure :) Nice one Usha ji...

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    1. Thanks a lot Leo.Grandchildren are reaiiy grand. Glad that you liked it.

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  4. That was very nice, I m happy for she will live, grandparents are such beautiful people in our lives. They give unconditional love, touching one!

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    1. Thanks Kislaya . I never saw my grand parents but God gave me the pleasure of becoming a grandmother. I have grandchildren they are sooo adorable.

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  5. This made me smile, such a warm story

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    1. Thank you Ritu for dropping by. Glad that this post made you smile.

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  6. Very happy to know that the story ended well. Grandparents are wonderful people. I had the privilege of knowing only one grandmother. But today I can see the joy that my parents and inlaws bring to my kids.

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    1. Thanks Cynthia for stopping by. I know that grandparents are more attached to the grandchildren than their own children.

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  7. Grand-parenting is always enjoyable...though it comes with many challenges! Lovely story, you gave a beautiful ending, Usha.

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    1. Panchali you are very correct.The relationship between the grand parents with their grandchildren is very special This bonding is unique.

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  8. Sweet. Just looking at her grandkids would have provided her with the necessary encouragement to live.

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    1. Thanks for visiting my site. Thanks for the sweet comments.

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  9. True!
    It is touching and tells about the unconditional love of family and relation

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    1. Welcome Uma to my site, Thank you for your sweet observations

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  10. Wow, very nice:) A hopeful moment!

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    1. Thank you Gayu for the visit..I am glad you liked it.

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  11. that's what love can do..miracles! wonderful post.

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  12. Hi princess. Your comments are welcome Thanks a lot.

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  13. There's something about grandchildren that brings untold joy to Grandparents... Wonderful write-up Ushaji :)

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    1. Yes Reshma you are correct. Grand parents and grand children share a special bond

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