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Wednesday, 10 December 2014

Hot Haiku

                                                                   Hot is the sun
                                                         Thirst dry lips, parched throat
                                                                 pilgrims dead tired.


                                                               Baby  elephant,
                                                      what great fun theyhave
                                                           forget the heat.

                                                           Sclorching heat
                                                       Inside the A/C room comfort
                                                            unaware of hot .

        Written for Haiku HorizonPrompt 'Hot"  Week 41
     










                                                                   

13 comments:

  1. Beautiful Haiku on the sun and its various forms:)

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  2. I love the diversity of each one. Brilliant collection! ♥

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  3. i loved all 3..the baby elephant was most fun!!

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  4. I sympathize with the poor pilgrims, had fun with the elephant and shivered in the A/C. What a nice variety you've made.




    Wordpress is not letting me leave comments on blogger again. Sorry.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/12/08/tea-parties/

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    1. Thanks Alice.
      why should you feel sorry for the internal tustle between two giants?

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  5. Need the hotness here... it has suddenly become so cold here... the first winter day, actually! :)

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    1. Here in Delhi,too, it is biting cold.

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  6. three different takes on the prompt ... and all are good .. found the second one so pleasant and the third a tad ironical .. while the first is all Aastha .. :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Kokila for the encouraging comments.Thanks for stopping by.

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