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Monday, 28 July 2014

Clear Haiku Horizon prompt 23



                                                      Clarity of words
                                               Teacher in the class spoke
                                                     impressed  students.'


                                                     The river water
                                              clear as pearls, reflects her face
                                                     not the cruel heart.


                                                     The young face
                                            clear, glittering, glows radiantly,
                                                      fit for beauty queen.



                                                  Marks of measles
                                       over shadowed  his clear skin.
                                               poor heart  hurt.



Prompted by Haiku Horizons  prompt 23  Clear







26 comments:

  1. I like the second one.Nice haiku Usha !

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  2. Beautiful Ma'am:)

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  3. Nice work, such a nice variety of haiku!

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    1. Thank you hawiiansupermom.Thanks for dropping by.

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  4. A wonderful series of haiku -- but I too am really impressed with the second haiku. :)

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    1. Thanks a lot for liking and also for paying a visit to my site.

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  5. Brilliant set Ushaji, I loved the first one for its simplicity and the second for the profound wisdom.

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    1. Thank you Reshma for liking this.

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  6. Very nice--I especially like the second one.

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    1. Thank you leonaslines for liking the haiku and also for the kind visit.

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    1. Thank you Celestine for the visit and your sweet comments.

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  8. second one is so deep! and the 4th one reminds me of chicken pox!

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  9. All are lovely. I like the contrast of the external reflection with the internal self.

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    1. Thank you alicekeysmd. for the encouraging comments.

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  10. i love the second one , so poetic ma'm !

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  11. Beautiful especially the second one.

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  12. I enjoyed your Haiku They're so beautifully written. :)

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