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Friday, 4 July 2014

United in love. Day 4 of UBC

                                                                
                                                                      Morning
                                                                   Bright morning
                                                               Sunny bright morning.
                                                          Lovers out for morning walk
                                                       Hand in hand reached the riverside.
                                                Lost in love, they whisper sweet  nothings.
                                              Should we bind in matrimony, be one eternally?
                                          Two bodies one soul  will  be inseparable forever forever.
                                               They decide to tie  a knot earliest possible date,
                                                 Happily the couple went dreaming of the day .
                                                   Did not know destiny had plans otherwise
                                                      Parents' shock denial, came as surprise
                                                        United bravely they faced obstacles.
                                                           Two became  one forever,
                                                               On  moonlit night
                                                                 Shining stars'
                                                                    Blessings.                         


 This  poem is written in inverted nonet.form. This is my first attempt.

Written for Ultimate Blog Challenge  Day  4.ultimate blog challenge

 pic courtesy google


                                                                                                                                                                                                 

25 comments:

  1. I am always for lovers:)

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    1. Yes Renu and specilly when they are united in love.

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  2. Wow! coherently composed. loved the alignment of the reverse nonet too . Good one, ma'am.

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    1. Asha your inspiring words are very encouraging.

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  3. Hello! impressive first attempt...

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    1. Thank you preciousmurmurs.Welcome to my space.

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  4. Beautiful! Captured the essence of love so well here, Ma'am!

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    1. Thank you Aathira. Glad you liked it.

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  5. Wonderful poem. And in a nonet form. Wow!

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    1. Thanks a lot, Rahmath. Welcome to my space.

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  6. So romantic! Happy ending make me go soft :) Love the simple and straightforward approach you have written it with :)

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  7. very sweet Ushaji, i was so unaware of this form of poetry!

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  8. i was unaware of this poetry form too maam! beautiful poem ♥

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  9. Beautifully lovely !!! A very sensible, first attempt !

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  10. That is a lovely poem Ushaji, the form is difficult but you made the love story shine like a diamond

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